by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
If you’re writing a cozy mystery, there are little things that come up sometimes. Writing is a Choose-Your-Own-Adventure process. You have so many different choices that can take the plot in different directions that it can seem overwhelming.
It doesn’t have to be that overwhelming, though. There are choices, but you can address them as they come along. Here are a few things to consider when planning the discovery of your victim:
The timing: You have a couple of different choices in timing the body’s discovery. You could start out with the discovery of the victim, which can be a fun way to shake things up a little bit. The only problem with that, I’ve found, is that you will need to deal with backstory more than you might otherwise have done. One way of getting around that is to include backstory about the victim and his or her relationships with others in suspect interviews.
My editors at Penguin preferred the victim to be discovered in the first 30-50 pages of the book, for pacing reasons. So if you don’t start off with the body, you might consider having a couple of scenes with the future victim interacting with one or two future suspects to make things easier to write later in the story. The suspects will be easier for the sleuth, who is merely a gifted amateur, to figure out.
The place: The location of the body needs to be somewhere accessible. It should be a place that all of the suspects have access to. It could be the victim’s own house (victim either didn’t lock up well or knew her attacker) or it could be a public place…but not too public because we don’t need the body discovered until the killer gets safely away (for now, anyway).
Who discovers the body? An easy way to get your sleuth involved is for him or her to discover the body and feel a sense of ownership. Of course, if your sleuth is finding all the bodies in your entire series, you might be stuck in the “Murder, She Wrote” Cabot Cove syndrome (Jessica Fletcher found a heck of a lot of bodies in a very small town. Statistically, she should probably have been considered as a possible serial killer. :) )
Alternatively, it could be good for someone close to your sleuth to discover the victim. That way the sleuth still feels looped in (maybe she’s even called before the police are called) but isn’t always falling over bodies.
Other considerations: Your sleuth, if he discovered the body, clearly needs to call the police. But depending on how close his relationship is with the police department, the sleuth may feel the need to find information on his own. Maybe he carefully assesses the scene before the officials arrive.
Another note: the condition of the body doesn’t require much description. The more description you include, the less-cozy the discovery scene. The readers can fill in the details by simply knowing that the victim was strangled, shot in the head, or pushed out a third-story window. Cozies are all about escape and not forensics, so you can go light on detail with these books.
Are you a mystery reader or writer? What else have you observed about victim discovery scenes?
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Good point about the sleuth discovering the bodies all the time. I mean, who does that really happen to? The only dead bodies I encounter are road kill.
And I don’t even encounter those, if I can help it!
This is really helpful, Elizabeth. I think underlying all of this is the need for credibility. It’s important that things like where the body is planted (and how it’s discovered) have to fall out naturally from the story, and have to be believable. Otherwise, readers aren’t going to get drawn in.
Making an unnatural thing like a body seem more natural is an important thing in cozies, for sure!
Someone close to the sleuth finding the body opens up a lot of possibilities, like the sleuth’s friend being a suspect, which would give her motivation to solve the crime.
It definitely helps…a friend, family member, coworker (especially if the coworker helps bring in the cozy series hook) all help to make it less jarring when the amateur investigates.
Thanks for the fab post, Elizabeth. Now that you are fully indie, do you still follow the Penguin guideline of the body turning up in the first 30-50 pgs?
On another note, my protag finds nearly every victim in the series, but it’s become a little in-joke each time. I include an eye-roll-heavy-sigh-head-shaking from the policeman who arrives on the scene (he’s all-too-familiar with the snoopy tendencies of the protag): “So, we have another body, Miss Wells?” Even when she leaves town in another book, he jokes with her to stay out of trouble and not trip over any dead bodies (of course, she does). I think my readers get a kick out of it, LOL.
Penguin made me nervous enough about it that I do! As a reader, I do expect them fairly early in murder mysteries, too (but maybe that’s because Penguin messed me up, ha!)
I like the way you handle it with humor! That makes all the difference. And you’re right…it’s like a wink to your readers. :)
Hi Elizabeth – I can see KB and Mistress Cabot Sleuth herself have fun – which we enjoy and we feel we know the persona and probably area … so it’s an easy read/watch – detective series are like that. Some murder mysteries are all too clever for their own good – but I switch off and am entertained.
I’ve come across some ‘new’ ones recently – they’ll appear on the blog in due course … a change from my usual posts – still most Canadian I suspect for the time being …
Happy New Year – and cheers Hilary
Oh, I’ll enjoy hearing about those! And will enjoy your Canadian posts in the meantime. :)
This is GREAT! Thank you for including explicit details like planting the body in the first 30-50 pages! I know where the victim ends up, but was starting to panic as I had typed ten pages and hadn’t even introduced them yet. Tips like this are SO amazing. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you. This is making the outline and writing process feel less intimidating!
I’m so glad the post helped! Good luck with your mystery! :)