Developing a Cozy Series: Hook

A beautiful Carnegie library in a small town.

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig 

It’s been a long time since I developed a new cozy mystery series.  Long enough so that I tried to remember exactly how I’d gone about it the last couple of times.  I ended up not being able to reconstruct my process from the other times, so I started out with a blank slate.  For posterity’s sake, in case I need to reference this in the future, myself, I thought I’d share what I’ve done (so far) this time.  Today I’m covering the series hook (also known as a theme) and then on next Friday (after a short blog break) I’ll talk about my considerations setting up sleuth, sidekick, and other basics.

For the cozy mystery, the hook is pretty important.  It’s actually important enough for me to have considered it the very first thing.  Did I want animal themed books? Craft themed? Occupation themed?  The first thing I did was to visit a fantastic cozy mystery resource:   https://www.cozy-mystery.com  . There is a page on the site that lists cozies by theme. There I reviewed all of the different options that others had used.  It may be different for you, but I felt very little need to be ultra-different from everyone else. I wasn’t looking for a really unusual hook, mostly because I wanted something that I could feel very comfortable writing.

If you are interested in something fun and different, there are a slew of different examples on the page to get your brain thinking. There are cruise ship mysteries, sleuths as dancers, golfing cozies, and candle-making cozies. By far, the most popular hook categories (to the extent that they have their own BISAC categories at retailers) are craft and hobby cozies, culinary-themed cozies, and cozies featuring cats and dogs.

First, I made a list of all the possibilities that I found the most appealing to me.   If there’s one thing I’ve learned from writing cozy series is that they can continue on for years and years.  Readers are incredibly loyal to cozy characters.   It’s important to choose a hook that appeals not just to the reader but to you, too.  You’re going to be spending a lot of time in that story world.

Next, I jotted down pros and cons of all of the potential hooks.  For instance, I thought a bed and breakfast series would be fun from the aspect of having different characters coming through and from the aspect that the setting could be very appealing.  The cons though? Wouldn’t the police be shutting down the B&B if it ended up being a hotspot for murder? And shouldn’t the owner be spending most of her time at the location? How would I make it work?

The next considerations were tied together.  How much research would this concept take and how much time did I have?  This may be part of the appeal of writing culinary or pet-themed cozies…it really doesn’t take much research. I knew if I picked something like genealogy or flower shops that I would be doing more research than if I’d picked something I knew more about.  I’ve put in likely 100 hours or more of research on quilting for the Southern Quilting Mysteries since I’m not crafty: those are hours going to quilt shows and shops, talking with quilters, reading websites, learning more about quilt guild activities, and watching quilters work on YouTube.  The time I spent was very rewarding to me and it was important that I got it right.  But I know that writing three series simultaneously means that I don’t really have the time to spend in a lot of research.

Keeping all of this in mind, I chose to go with a library theme and have my sleuth work as a librarian. I grew up in a library and my family was always either on the board or involved with Friends of the Library, or both.  I still did a lot of set-up research, but not nearly as much as was needed for my quilting series (or, actually, for my Memphis Barbeque series, either).  And…readers like books and libraries.  :)

This post is intended mainly for cozy writers because of the special emphasis the genre puts on hook, but many of these considerations are important for writers of other genres, as well.

For further reading,  see writer Janice Hardy’s post  “5 Things to Consider When Choosing a Character’s Career.”

If you’re a cozy writer, how have you picked your hook?  For other genres, how important is your protagonist’s occupation or hobby?

And quick note that I’m taking a long weekend this weekend and another short blog break since I’ll have limited access to Wifi.  Twitterific will run this Sunday (but no posts this Friday or Monday).  I’ll be back with a post on cozy series development on Friday, December 7th. Thanks!

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Twitterific Writing Links

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Twitterific writing links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 48,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Have you visited the WKB lately?  Check out the new redesign where you can browse by category, and sign up for free writing articles, on topics you choose, delivered to your email inbox!  Sign up for the Hiveword newsletter here.

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Thanks to Dan Blank for our conversation on fitting in writing, writing as a parent, and my publication journey.

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Twitterific Writing Links

Bluebird with beak open and 'Twitterific Writing Links' by ElizabethSCraig superimposed on the image

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Twitterific writing links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 48,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Have you visited the WKB lately?  Check out the new redesign where you can browse by category, and sign up for free writing articles, on topics you choose, delivered to your email inbox!  Sign up for the Hiveword newsletter here.

I’m taking this week off for Thanksgiving and will be back next Sunday with another Twitterific.  :)  Happy Thanksgiving! 

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Writing the Small Town Setting

A small town's downtown business district against a sunset.

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

As a mystery writer, I’m especially fond of small town settings.  I have written larger cities (notably the Memphis Barbeque series), but to make it work, I basically created a small setting within a larger one (life surrounding a family-owned restaurant).

I think small town settings have a lot to offer writers of other genres, too.  That’s because it offers ample opportunity for conflict…and we all know that conflict drives stories.

You may have a more idealistic view of small towns.  That dichotomy is what makes it so interesting.

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So You’ve Gotten Your Rights Back

A contract with an ink pen on top near a signature line.

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

I’ve published a couple of posts about getting your character rights back from publishers.  This enables writers to continue publishing new books in a series.   In my case, I’d been allowed to continue my series, but I hadn’t been able to republish my backlist (the publishers still wanted to hold those rights).

My backlist is still being held by Penguin for one of my series (and another Penguin series doesn’t have a hope of released rights), but for another publisher I finally have the digital rights back to the first book in the Myrtle Clover series (as of July).  I’d received print rights back some time back to the book.

If this all sounds rather complicated…yes, it can be.   I regularly receive emails from traditionally published writers who either aren’t sure about how to go about asking for rights or who aren’t totally sure what to do after they get their rights back.

If you’re trying to get your rights back, see these posts of mine for a little direction:

Thoughts on Getting Rights Back

Self-Publishing a Series that Started in Trad. Pub

If you’re a writer who isn’t totally sure what to do once you’ve gotten yours back, here are some ideas (I’m working on most of these, myself).Continue reading

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