The Expository Opening to Novels

Guest Post by Jack SmithWrite and Revise for Publication

A strong opening to a novel is, of course, important.  If the opening is boring or off-putting in any way, the reader is likely not to read on.  It is true that some readers will be patient and hope things pick up, but naturally you can’t count on that.   There are four basic opening types in fiction: exposition (I mean by this expository prose), description, narrative summary, and narrative scene.  They are all used by published writers, and one isn’t better or worse than the others.  What’s important is deciding which works best in your novel.

Exposition, as a rhetorical mode, means explanation.  Writers are sometimes steered away from an expository opening for fear of mere telling. Who wants to read a long, boring presentation (or telling) of background information setting up the story?  Readers want to get directly involved in the conflict; they want to be pulled in.   But don’t fear the expository mode—instead, work it to your advantage. Continue reading

Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Writing fast and hard:  http://ow.ly/BZsf6  @tobywneal

How to Plan Your Book: http://ow.ly/BZsfc @susiemander

How a Book Coach Can Jumpstart Your Writing Career: http://ow.ly/BZqOW @LisaCron

Self-Editing: Spot Checking:  http://ow.ly/BZsfj @carynmcgill

Everything You Need to Know About the @Reply:  http://ow.ly/BZsfn @AnnieNeugebauerContinue reading

Goodreads Author Q&A

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraigblog3

I ran across something a few days ago that I thought I’d share here—although I’m probably the last person on the block to find out about this.  It’s the Goodreads Author Q&A.

I’m trying to do better about visiting Goodreads. The truth is that Goodreads can be a scary environment for writers. Reviews are especially harsh there and there have been incidents involving author bullying in the past. To be fair, there have also been authors who have behaved poorly on the site.

When I’m on a site like Goodreads, I make it a point to keep a low profile.  Otherwise, it’s almost like author intrusion when authors butt into reader conversations.

That being said…when I was recently asked how I’ve been able to garner reviews right out of the gate…it’s been those Goodreads giveaways.  And the site is popular with avid readers.Continue reading

Write Mysteries for Kids…for the Right Reasons

by Dori Butler,  HauntedLibrary1

 I write mysteries for kids. I don’t write for this audience because it’s easier than writing for adults. (It’s NOT easier!) I write for this audience because I like it! I like kids. I like kids’ books. I make regular trips to the library to check out new kids books and find out which books are the most popular.

 I like to tell stories, but I really like to turn non-readers into readers. Whether they’re non-readers because of ability or interest. As a writer, there’s nothing more satisfying than to receive a heartfelt letter or e-mail that begins, “I never really liked reading before, but then I read your [insert book title here] all by myself.” That’s why I write for kids.Continue reading

Twitterific Writing Links

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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Twitterific links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 23,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

Why we need a writing process more than a writing ritual:  http://ow.ly/BEH0h @suddenlyjamie

An Australian Digital-Only Publisher Signs Unagented Authors from Around the World: http://ow.ly/C01Mu @Porter_Anderson @stevepvincent

The Challenges of Writing a Sequel:  http://ow.ly/BEGSK @StinaLL

5 Reasons Why Your Self-Published Book Isn’t Selling: http://ow.ly/BEHjt @mommifried

15 Essential Films Every Aspiring Screenwriter Must Watch:  http://ow.ly/BEGIq  @davidcinemaContinue reading

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