Yanking Readers Out of a Story

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraigDeathtoStock1

I can be a pretty annoying person to watch television or movies with.  Maybe most writers are.  Plot holes and plot devices trip me up in bad stories and I’m too analytical of what works in good stories. This may be why I don’t get a lot of invitations to hang out and watch TV with members of my family.

Regardless of my general unpopularity as a movie-watching companion, my husband and I were watching the movie Lucy on Amazon Prime last weekend.  It was, actually, a good film and one of the few genres that overlap enough so that my husband and I can both enjoy it.  But there was one part (okay, probably three parts, actually. But I won’t give spoilers) where my husband said, “But why are they doing that?  That wouldn’t happen—there would be cops all over the place.”  And I said, maybe a bit impatiently, “Because it has to happen.  For the story.”  And I quickly explained why.

Once I pointed out the strings and the puppet master, we were both watching the movie from a different perspective.

It’s those types of moments when I’m reading a book or watching TV or movies that I try to avoid as a writer. Continue reading

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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Twitterific writing links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 30,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

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10 Common Fiction Problems and How to Fix Them

Guest Post by Jack SmithWrite and Revise for Publication

When you write and revise your fiction, you deal with a host of problems.  With some novels, it’s hard to decide on the right point of view.  With others, it’s a struggle to work out the plot.  Sometimes it’s a matter of getting the language down just right.  Of course it’s one thing to spot a problem, another to fix it.  Consider the following ten rather typical problems most fiction writers face—and some possible fixes.

  1. A dull character

Perhaps in the abstract one can sympathize or empathize with your character’s ambitions, needs, desires, plight, etc., but when it comes down to the writing itself, the character is flat-out dull, vacuous—bearing nothing distinctly human.   If this is the case, you need to individualize your character by including:Continue reading

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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Twitterific writing links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 30,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

8 Tips to Liven Up An Author Webinar:  http://ow.ly/H7Inh @wordsprof

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How to outline a short story for beginners:  http://ow.ly/H7I0K @writers_write

Checking Out: A Writer Reboots in Mid-Life:  http://ow.ly/H7Inj @jenpastiloff.       Continue reading

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