Crafting a Good Protagonist

A Christmas Carol--Dickens What makes a good protagonist? This is a pretty subjective question since different readers like different types of heroes and heroines. But I see some common traits among the protagonists I admire:

They’re likeable. Now, I’ve read plenty of books with unlikeable protagonists (Catcher in the Rye, anyone?), but although I sometimes appreciated the talent of the author, I just didn’t care what happened to the protagonist. And that’s just a major problem. What if you have your whiny, unpopular protagonist and you’re building up to the major climax of the novel. He’s about to be thrown off a cliff….or is thrown off a cliff. If the guy isn’t someone I like, I’m thinking: “Eh. Too bad about him. Let’s see….what’s that next book on my reading list?”

If they’re not likeable (Ebenezer Scrooge) , they experience an epiphany and a radical change of heart.

Readers can relate to them. Or, if they can’t relate to them, they admire them, at least. Does anyone relate to James Bond? Anybody out there a crack shot, a pilot, a scuba diver, extraordinarily handsome, etc? But we can admire him. He’s one of the good guys.

They solve their own problems and, possibly, the problems of others. I don’t enjoy it when my protagonist gets rescued. Even in romances, that gets old (if they do get rescued in a romance, can the favor be returned at a later time? One-way rescuing all the time makes someone look weak.)

They’re intelligent. Or, if they’re not intelligent (Forrest Gump by Winston Groom), they have plenty of personality to make up for it. People who take the time to read are usually pretty intelligent. I think most readers have little patience for protagonists who aren’t too bright.

Related, but slightly different to the observation above: they behave intelligently. So, maybe they are smart. So why do they go down into the basement when they know the killer is down there? Why would they arrange to meet a murderer in a deserted location? Why?

Things happen to them. Maybe they have amazing luck—maybe they have amazingly bad luck. Maybe they’ve landed in a crazy family, or fall over murdered bodies all the time (Miss Marple), or have an interesting way of looking at the world. But they’re not boring and their life isn’t, either.

They have flaws. It’s so tedious to have a protagonist who is just too perfect. Unless they’re the Christ-figure in the book, they need to have some flaws. We’ll like them a lot better for it.

Do your favorite protagonists share common traits?

Elizabeth Spann Craig

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Elizabeth writes the Memphis Barbeque series (as Riley Adams) and the Southern Quilting mysteries for Penguin and writes the Myrtle Clover series for Midnight Ink and independently. She also has a blog, which was named by Writer’s Digest as one of the 101 Best Websites for Writers. There she posts on the writing craft, finding inspiration in everyday life, and fitting writing into a busy schedule.

7 Comments

  1. Cassandra JadeJune 10, 2009

    I’m with you in that the protagonist ahs to be likable, one of the biggest reasons I never finish Lord of the Rings (the thousand times I’ve tried to read it) is that I really wish Sam would just off Frodo and be done with it. I would add one more point to your list though, they have to be unique in some way. Something about them needs to be distinct from every other protagonist that has been read about previously, otherwise, the reader feels like they are just rereading the same words with a make over.

  2. Alan OrloffJune 10, 2009

    I like my protagonists to have a sense of humor.

    And Galen, I thought James Bond was patterned on moi. (I’ll see you later, on the pistol range.)

  3. Galen Kindley--AuthorJune 10, 2009

    You know, I identify with James Bond pretty easily. Of course, as is widely known, I’m “…a crack shot, a pilot, a scuba diver, extraordinarily handsome, etc.” In fact, I’ve come to believe the entire Bondian thingie was fashioned on me.

    Visiting hours at The Happily Delusional Rest Home are, Daily, 9 to 5. You’ll find me on the pistol range–or, in front of a mirror.

    Best Regards, Galen.
    GalenKindley.com

  4. alexisgrantJune 10, 2009

    Hm. I suppose since I’m writing a travel memoir, I’m my own protagonist — with my flaws out there for the world to see.

  5. Patricia StolteyJune 10, 2009

    I love the very human protagonists (and the supporting characters) in mysteries written by Craig Johnson (Wyoming Sheriff Walt Longmire series) and William Kent Krueger (Cork O’Connor series). These are people I’d like to know, in spite of their flaws.

  6. N A SharpeJune 10, 2009

    I think their flaws are the part of them that the readers identify with – the part that has them cheering them on. Yes, they have to be likeable or at the very least redeemable.

    Nancy, from Just a Thought…

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