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Just a quick post today on a discovery I made with my manuscript. One of the revisions I made to my Quilt or Innocence manuscript ended up making a big difference to the plot.

It involved a scene with a particular suspect who was behaving in a suspicious manner. The questions that arose from the scene were: why was the suspect behaving in this manner? What was she trying to hide?

A couple of chapters later, I had an answer for the reader. I showed the sleuth and the reader exactly why the suspect was behaving in that way.

The revealing moment did, actually, also serve to spur some additional questions about the suspect and the suspect’s motive…so it had originally served a purpose.

But I found when I revised the section and delayed answering the question I’d posed in the story, the tension was increased.

When I finally did reveal the answer to the question, the scene had a more climactic feel to it. Plus, I think it will make the reader scramble a little toward the end…so, if that’s true, then this must mean that…

I’ve used this trick before in my writing, but usually for something either really big or a small subplot that I’d woven into the book. But I liked making this change for a medium-sized plot element…because, in doing so, it actually made the plot point bigger and more important.

The only thing to be careful with, if you’re making this change in the revision process and not as you’re writing your draft, is that you clean up any references to the revealed answer in between the question asked and the problem solved. I was surprised how much I’d mentioned it. Still, it’s a pretty easy change to make.

What kinds of questions are you raising in your story? When are you answering them? Can you delay answering them for a bigger effect?

I do think this is a great time to be a writer. We’ve got options and possibilities and an exciting future.

But the publishing industry (including the retail end of things, bookstores) are having a rough time.

My Borders recently closed. And Borders was a bookstore I visited about once a week.

Fortunately, we do still have Barnes and Noble here (our independent bookstores are too far from me). I was there on Saturday evening with my husband and we bought three books.

My membership with Barnes and Noble expires at the end of the month. The associate was explaining the renewal terms to me and I thought, “Uh oh. This isn’t good.”

That’s because they were decreasing the amount of the discount you’d get on a hardcover book from 20% off to 10% off (this is just the regular hardcovers, not the bestsellers, where you still get a substantial discount.)

The associate explained that, since they’d decreased that discount, they were offering renewing customers $25 off Nook Color e-readers and $10 off regular Nooks.

So…basically, they were rewarding readers who want ebooks. The bookstore was, actually, encouraging readers to get ebooks.

I thought about this a little more (and, I’m a Kindle person…I don’t have a Nook.) My teenage son—an avid reader—is one of the reasons I’m at a bookstore once a week. He wants YA books constantly thrown his way (and the library isn’t able to acquire them at the pace they’d like.) I’m buying brand-new hardcover books for him. They are not on the bestseller list, but they’re hot books.

So, the YA books he likes won’t be out in paperback for a while…maybe a year? And the bookstore’s discount has gotten punier for these hardcovers that cost an arm and a leg.

But, on my Kindle, I can immediately purchase these books without driving across town (spending precious and costly gasoline), and at a discounted price. And, unfortunately, without going through Barnes and Noble (since I have a Kindle.)

This worries me a little. Because you know what I’m probably going to do? Buy my son a Kindle. In the long run, we’ll save money and he’ll get all the books he wants. Bottom line, I want him to keep reading and that means supplying him with a steady stream of the books he wants (without going broke.)

But what will happen to the bookstore? And the publishers who aren’t rethinking pricing and formats?

I think we may already be seeing some of that. Publishers Weekly reports that ebook sales for June rose 167% while print declined sharply:

E-book sales rose 167% in June, to $80.2 million, at the 15 houses that reported figures to AAP’s monthly sales report and closed the first half of the year with sales up 161%, to $473.8 million…

…Trade paperback sales had the largest decline, down 64%, while children’s hardcover sales were off 31%. Adult hardcover sales fell 25%, mass market sales were down 22% and children’s paperback was off 13%.

I have several books for sale at the Barnes and Noble, myself. I’d like for the store to keep selling books and I’d like for my publishers to keep thinking of me for projects and putting physical books out. I’d like for them to do well. They’ve been good to me.

But I worry over some of these decisions I see being made—the pricing of different formats (publishers) and fewer discounts for hardcover formats (booksellers.)

What are your thoughts on the ebook revolution and what it means to publishing and book retail? (Again, I think it’s a great time to be a writer and a reader…it’s just the other side of the industry I’m concerned about.)

My daughter has just started taking horseback riding lessons.

The lady who’s instructing her wants to loop me in on what’s going on. I appreciate this, but I have no idea what she’s talking about.

She said, “Your daughter will come in and will put the harness on the horse….blah blah, brush…blah blah, saddle blanket and bumper and saddle, blah blah, girth…blah blah, bridle and bit…”

I listened politely during the first lesson, but at the second lesson I said, “I’m sorry—I’m not an equestrian.” Plus, I didn’t think I really needed to know about all the equipment. We’re not buying a horse (thankfully) and I’m not planning on buying the tack.

I was reminded of this on Thursday when I had an talk with one of my editors about my first quilting mystery, Quilt or Innocence which is coming out next summer. Y’all might be shocked to hear this, but I’m not a quilter. :)

This means I’ve done a lot of quilting research. That’s because we have to know a lot to be able to convey a subject seamlessly.

But if I write about all the details of quilting, that’s going to make the readers feel like I did with the riding instructor. Besides, I don’t want to bring my readers out of the story and mystery plot. And I’m not writing a quilting how-to book.

What my editor wanted more of was the texture and colors and patterns—things that many readers would appreciate—the art of the quilts. What she wanted less of was quilting terms (or more quilting terms in context.) Because once or twice I dropped in a quilting verb and didn’t really put it into context (not wanting to over-explain…but under explained, instead.) Her ideas seemed like excellent suggestions to me…that I was able to convey the feel of the quilting world and not do a research dump on the unsuspecting reader.

Other ways I added quilting to the book:

I’ve got a novice quilter in the book who occasionally needs pithy explanations of quilting techniques.

There are a couple of scenes where quilting terminology and fabrics are naturally integrated—in a quilt shop.

There were some quick mentions in dialogue. I tried to indicate a little bit about each character when they discussed quilting. (Confident, reticent, boastful, etc.)

I think the balance between the craft and the mystery worked out pretty well in the book…although it was a real challenge for me. Do you have to research for your books? How do you integrate your research in a natural way?

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The key to writing a fast 1st draft: http://bit.ly/oXLiB5 @LiaKeyes

Do Spoilers Really Spoil Anything? http://bit.ly/p6C1vr @janice_hardy

Emotional Freedom Technique For Writers: http://bit.ly/nNDIRg

Cutting Unnecessary Characters: http://bit.ly/npDDeL @charissaweaks

How Pets Can Help With the Creation of Compelling Characters: http://bit.ly/oJmEDj @kselliottwriter

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5 Stress-Busters to Beat a Deadline: http://bit.ly/pTzn9D

5 Things Self-Publishers Shouldn’t Worry About (But They Do): http://bit.ly/pvFpWQ #ebooks

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How to rescue a stalled plot: http://bit.ly/ok1nIR

8 tools for using humor in your fiction: http://bit.ly/r63lDW @BryanThomasS

Why 1 writer doesn’t autofollow on Twitter and 10 reasons she might not individually follow back: http://bit.ly/q3yB9f @katdish

Freelancers–How to Convince Prospects You’re a Pro Writer: http://bit.ly/nH8dLt @TiceWrites

A review of verb tense: http://bit.ly/n3wiNp

The big tent of reading: http://bit.ly/oEn2lj @BTMargins

The cult of SF: http://bit.ly/mWNxDp @MarkCN

Their Cheatin’ Hearts: Infidelity in Women’s Fiction: http://bit.ly/potyWf @heroesnhearts

An Agent on Authors and Magical Thinking: http://bit.ly/pjaSFb #pubtip

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Word misuse: http://bit.ly/ovPK3p

1 writer’s marketing plan: http://bit.ly/p4C9f4 @Ghunibee

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1 writer’s love/hate relationship w/ storyboards: http://bit.ly/pEnQ7D

7 Principles of Pitching Articles: http://bit.ly/pal5Ts

Fear is the downfall of publishing: http://bit.ly/n73xAg @bob_mayer

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6 ways to tame writers’ public speaking fears: http://bit.ly/pF1dgr

The rise of the indie author: http://bit.ly/q4eaDx #ebooks @tglong

The good, the bad, and the ugly of historical research: http://bit.ly/pAKObP @kbowenwriter

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The self published author has no one to tell him no: http://bit.ly/pNw4mW #ebooks

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15 reasons writers love libraries: http://bit.ly/n2Let8

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9 Forms of the Past Tense: http://bit.ly/pzyXeD

Chapter-by-Chapter Critique Tips: http://bit.ly/ozWrCG @marybaka

To make money with #ebooks, you must have a good number for sale: http://bit.ly/nj2KNE @DeanWesleySmith

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Amazon Considers #eBook Rental Service: http://bit.ly/njUYFF @galleycat

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What authors can learn from the bestseller lists: http://bit.ly/o2Fb6i

The Art of the Picture Book: http://bit.ly/mWcjt4 @fuelyourwriting

Tips for faster paced novels: http://bit.ly/o1l9H9 @SarahAHoyt

Are Publishers Unwittingly Responsible For 167% Surge In #ebook Sales? http://bit.ly/q3MLds @ChandlerWrites

A discussion on fantasy subgenres: http://bit.ly/n4DF3M @FantasyFaction

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Research–too much and too little: http://bit.ly/ra3WWU @authorterryo

Writing…it’s worth the trouble: http://bit.ly/qxUUEz @JeffGoins

How to Find Clichés in Your Writing: http://bit.ly/p0NhIV @BTMargins

14 Dos and Don’ts for Introducing Your Protagonist: http://bit.ly/oN2gzG @AnneRAllen

Contrasting character traits: http://bit.ly/pxXCaY

When an editor’s or agent’s personal politics changes a story: http://bit.ly/pCvhqV @sarahlapolla

The art and craft of fantasy writing: http://bit.ly/qwHzE9

Composing composition: http://bit.ly/revGdB @RavenRequiem13

Don’t Use “The” Before Kindle or Nook? http://bit.ly/pgEZwJ

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A writer’s main objective: http://bit.ly/nsKPlR

Deadly Sin of –Treating the Reader Like a Moron: http://bit.ly/nbQytz

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10 lies you might tell yourself while editing: http://bit.ly/qocRkD @elspethwrites

7 Ways to Develop Dazzling Dialogue: http://bit.ly/qv3dS7 @JodyHedlund

When you want to change agents: http://bit.ly/pWFmBE @4Kidlit

A look at the history of food & incorporating it into our books: http://bit.ly/qL2VhT @GeneLempp

Archetypes in writers and gender differences: http://bit.ly/qK7XqX

How to write a query letter: http://bit.ly/q2KiBa #pubtip @BubbleCow

The YA Author’s Complete Guide to Acceptable Characters: http://bit.ly/nsr26O @BTMargins

6 Compelling Reasons for Authors to Blog: http://bit.ly/rba94s @jfbookman

5 tips for a stronger novel: http://bit.ly/rk7nzJ s @catewoods

75 Contronyms (Words with Contradictory Meanings): http://bit.ly/piUxa3

Putting Creatives in a Box: http://bit.ly/nee9SI @on_creativity

Should you hire a book publicist? http://bit.ly/nGzzMh @GalleyCat

When the going gets tough: http://bit.ly/q2OSlc @MsAnnAguirre

Will my agent rep a different genre? http://bit.ly/qlkWSv @RachelleGardner

Deciding on device: http://bit.ly/nfivPZ @Mommy_Authors

Ebook Cover Design: Context Creates Possibilities: http://bit.ly/r6ubSb #ebooks @namenick

Amazon Looking for Tablet Content: http://bit.ly/paW347 @PassiveVoiceBlg

2 Words That Can Change Your Writing Career: http://bit.ly/qmfFmk @writeitsideways

An editorial director on the “no response means no” policy: http://bit.ly/oDfipS

If you can’t describe your story, there probably isn’t a story, states an agent: http://bit.ly/nMlT4b @greyhausagency

A character’s behavior reveals underlying power assumptions: http://bit.ly/r3M4gv @JulietteWade

Using more than 1 POV character: http://bit.ly/pOX6M9 @JulietteWade

Authors Guild And Others Sue Universities for Copyright Infringement: http://bit.ly/rtcbRV @victoriastrauss

“Look Inside” for Kindle Books – 3 Tips for Authors: http://bit.ly/pyOW0q #ebooks @namenick

The 3-Step 3-Minute Writer’s Workout Warm-Up: http://bit.ly/oSCVZx @YAHighway

Lessons of letting go–the author and his babies: http://bit.ly/qmOfOu @BryanThomasS

3 tips for becoming a better writer: http://bit.ly/qjBmpj @TheCreativePenn

Part of the creative process is creating a mess: http://bit.ly/oNh8WI @bookviewcafe

Resources that protect writers: http://bit.ly/n54C4T

1st v. 3rd person POV: http://bit.ly/reLTzg @Janice_Hardy

Fanfiction & Original Fiction: Similarities and Differences: http://bit.ly/oB2khK

5 tips to jump-start a stalled novel: http://bit.ly/r4zmDU s

Not Every Ebook is a Success, But it’s Always a Lesson: http://bit.ly/rceZk4 @problogger

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How to self-promote without selling your soul: http://bit.ly/qIU5wi @lkblackburne

The Translation Continuum – Speaking Across the Divide: http://bit.ly/q1dsus @BTMargins

Vocation vs. Avocation: http://bit.ly/rfbtl6

Quick tweaks can fix revision smudges: http://bit.ly/oNPD86

Defying Digital, Airport and Transit Bookstores Gain Ground at Home and Abroad: http://bit.ly/mVm2Mp #publishing

Elements of religion, with cautions, for worldbuilders: http://bit.ly/qSxjEq @JulietteWade

Is media tie-in writing right for you? http://bit.ly/rhrscg @jameslsutter

How the Crowd Is Shaping the Future of Storytelling: http://on.mash.to/qhXNo2 @mashable

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What Writing and Ghost Stories Have in Common: http://bit.ly/pxPVRx @YAHighway

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An Agent on Looking Around While Still Represented: http://bit.ly/q0jf1n @Kid_Lit

The art of the subplot: http://bit.ly/rcVqec @FantasyFaction

How to write effective dialogue: http://bit.ly/ncEsC3 @BubbleCow

6 reasons an agent or editor may say your story is “not for them”: http://bit.ly/o0kr2h

How to Write A Wildly Successful Web Series: http://bit.ly/pGJhC6 @ollinmorales

Reselling digital products: http://bit.ly/p7xemQ @TheresaStevens

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Nice collection of industry news, views, & trends by @Porter_Anderson for @JaneFriedman : http://bit.ly/qrXXrZ

How Rowling revealed backstory: http://bit.ly/qAekfy @HP4Writers

When novel ideas masquerade as short stories: http://bit.ly/nL5F3w @bluemaven

All my tweets are archived and searchable for free at the Writer’s Knowledge Base: http://bit.ly/dYRayA

Best Articles This Week for Writers 9/16/11: http://bit.ly/req2Fg @4kidlit

Pseudo Dialogue Tags: http://bit.ly/qNE2Za @TaliaVance

Research for Writers: In Defense of Wikipedia: http://bit.ly/r5V0Ms

Why your hero must pet a dog: http://bit.ly/q2xw5A @KMWeiland

Dated writing: http://bit.ly/ovpNDj

Voice begins with word choices: http://bit.ly/qk4vqE

Voice Is Not Everything (but it is vitally important): http://bit.ly/paNkXB

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The Submission Process: One Author’s Perspective: http://bit.ly/nXDdc2

The Deadly Sins of Romance Writing: http://bit.ly/puggXV

Book Cards Work: http://bit.ly/rlPuh6 @DeanWesleySmith

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Book Trailers — worth the effort? http://bit.ly/rbx0vZ @George_Ivanoff

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Tips for researching your novel: http://bit.ly/pLjoVC @BubbleCow

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Sometimes I go on bike rides with my children. We start out in the neighborhood, then head to a nearby greenway.

The only bad thing about biking with my ten year old daughter is that she scares the crap out of me.

I review safety before we start biking, but one thing happens every time. We’ll cross a road in our neighborhood and she’ll look carefully to the right and left, but never behind her. Not until I start doing my alarmed mother bird squawk, that is.

This is, I know, because she’s a child. She’s looking for danger that’s ahead and to her sides. But what about a car coming up from behind her and making a turn?

My 14 year old son, I’ve noticed, does make a quick check behind him. This has only happened for the last few years, though…and I think he’s consciously thinking about it.

For adults, it comes naturally. I’ve watched adult pedestrians in downtown Charlotte turn to look for cars from any direction they might be coming from…without even pausing in conversation.

How many hours does it take before something we once had to think about comes naturally? I’m not sure. But I know the more we practice anything, the better we get.

This has most recently come to my attention as I’ve revised an old book of mine. I’ve noticed bits of wooden prose, stilted dialogue, and distracting paragraphs that went off on tangents.

My edits these days are for totally different things…for the most part I’ve figured out the stuff that used to trip me up so badly five years ago. That’s totally due from frequent writing. We naturally improve. Some of the writing craft that we have to constantly think about at first, becomes second nature.

As a writer, do you notice your improvements? Do they help you stay motivated?