Lending Realism to the Paranormal—by Lisa Gail Green

by Lisa Gail Green, @LisaGailGreen

Photo on 2011-12-09 at 13.02 #2Lending realism to paranormal. It sounds like an oxymoron, doesn’t it? But allowing your readers to suspend their disbelief is vital if you’re writing in this genre or any other type of speculative fiction. Think of Harry Potter for a moment. What was it about an entire society of witches and wizards complete with schools, government and other fantastical creatures that allowed us to read on while hoping for an owl of our own?

I’ve broken down five features I believe are imperative to creating “realistic” paranormal.

1. The details.

It’s the small things that matter. If I buy into a world I want to be able to taste the food, feel the textures, hear the sounds – not just for the major things, but for the everyday bits as well. How does a werewolf shave? Does he laugh at the silliness of it?

2. The characters must be human.

I don’t mean literally. Your MC can be an alien with three heads for all I know. What I mean is that inside, the thoughts and feelings should be familiar to the reader. We have to be able to connect on a visceral level. So as long as we have that internal connection, the character will be much easier to accept.

3. The world must be complete in the author’s mind.

If you don’t understand your world, neither will your reader. You have to know how everything works and fits together if you want to have a hope of conveying it to others. Don’t gloss over parts you are having trouble with, make sure you have a reason and that it all fits together, otherwise fix it.

4. There must be no discrepancies.

If your vampire can’t see himself in a mirror, you better have a very good reason why the girl see’s him coming at the end through a reflection in the water. Make sure if there’s a rule, you carry through to the end. If your MC saves the day because of some hidden power, please build up to that reveal, so it feels natural and not like something you came up with to get yourself out of a corner you’ve written yourself into!

5. The rules must be based on universal truths.

I’m going to assume the laws of gravity apply unless otherwise stated. And even if you don’t reveal every last thing, you will find it helps to have a solid reason as to why things are the way they are. The logic will translate onto the page.

What do you think? Have I missed any key elements?

newestpicLisa Gail Green writes paranormal and fantasy. Her newest publication is IDENTITY CRISIS in the anthology GODS OF JUSTICE.

Lisa is an active participant on EnchantedInkpot.com as well as ChildrensPublishing.blogspot.com. You can find Lisa most often on her own blog at paranormalpointofview.blogspot.com or Twitter as @LisaGailGreen. She would most definitely have a werewolf for a pet if she weren’t allergic.

Twitterific


by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Below are the writing-related links I tweeted last week.

The Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine, designed by software engineer and writer Mike Fleming, makes all these links (now over 12,000) searchable.

imageSign up for the free monthly WKB newsletter for the web’s best links and interviews:http://bit.ly/gx7hg1 .
Different approaches to naming characters: http://bit.ly/A5vLkK @kirstenhubbard
How Barnes & Noble Can Take a Bite Out of Amazon: http://bit.ly/Am4STf @JosephJEsposito for @scholarlykitchn
How “Literary” and “Entrepreneur” Are Becoming Intertwined: http://bit.ly/zNU4E6 @biblioracle for @janefriedman
The symbiosis linking SF and mainstream: http://bit.ly/zhyS5w
A look at social media tool Triberr: http://bit.ly/wNnfhu @Jhansenwrites
A Singularly Unpopular View of Adverbs: http://bit.ly/wN4rLf @KeithCronin
Writing daily when you have a day job (written for bloggers, works for novelists): http://bit.ly/wUVh7f @PushingSocial
Your dialogue can do more: http://bit.ly/xcV9DS @JulietteWade
5 Ways to Draw Readers Into Your Articles: http://bit.ly/yFyHmg
Publishing house procedure for consideration of a manuscript: http://bit.ly/A5cPdH @bookendsjessica
Using Either, Neither, Or, and Nor Correctly: http://bit.ly/xMDu9d @write_practice
You can write daily: http://bit.ly/zyhBkZ @eMergentPublish
Dealing with deadlines: http://bit.ly/wUaDQm @rachellegardner
10 Tips on Guest Blogging and Blog Tours: http://bit.ly/wFacwh @pstoltey
Evaluating a new publisher? Give yourself the gift of time: http://bit.ly/w1qA3V @behlerpublish
Creative forced association: http://bit.ly/wzavUO @changingminds for @SiriusPress
4 Ways to Recycle Dusty Manuscripts: http://bit.ly/x3gkIp @JulieMusil
Thoughts on second books: http://bit.ly/wM40zc @KALongshore
6 Simple Ways to Reboot Your Writing Routine: http://bit.ly/yP0wrF @BrianKlems
Some truths about publishing aren’t true anymore: http://bit.ly/xVhae5 @PassiveVoiceBlg
8 Effective Ways To Harness Creativity: http://bit.ly/zM8lfX
Some stories just aren’t yours to tell: http://bit.ly/yeRIVz @sarahahoyt
How to Avoid 10 Common Conference Mistakes That Most Writers Make: http://bit.ly/zJyV2y @BrianAKlems
All the links I shared on Twitter last week: http://bit.ly/xAkL10
Selling & Managing Audio Rights: http://bit.ly/xE0aPd @SaraMegibow
Query letter template: http://bit.ly/A7g22v @BubbleCow
Pinning down what makes a book high concept: http://bit.ly/yv6VFR @4kidlit
When agents pitch to editors: http://bit.ly/yv6VFR @rachellegardner
Punctuation in Fiction—Are There Prohibitions? http://bit.ly/yNfbqz @noveleditor
Punishing the Peccadillo: http://bit.ly/xviN5X @behlerpublish
20 Economical Book Marketing Techniques: http://bit.ly/wac61d @selfpubreview
Creating Profitable and Successful Blogs: http://bit.ly/wqAQqP @problogger
Forging Stories: Exploring the Metaphor: http://bit.ly/wfYBOc
How subplots are useful for writers: http://bit.ly/wHgA2i @Mommy_Authors
Twitter: Top 5 Ways to Find Your Tribe: http://bit.ly/yT2Fa1 @JFBookman
Repurposing Blogs as Books for ‘Immediacy’: http://bit.ly/Ah0s3y @pubperspectives
You must ship: http://bit.ly/z1NLK6 @JeffGoins
How To Pick and Choose a Writers Conference: http://bit.ly/yLA27Q @Bob_Mayer
How to Be a Better Blogger, Part 1: http://bit.ly/xpqLgI @SarahForgrave
7 things to consider when trying to find readers for your ebook: http://bit.ly/AERXsE @SuspenseAuthors
Why should never be a chore: http://bit.ly/yI741X @eMergentPublish
Do You Hold E-Rights to Your Traditionally Published Book? http://bit.ly/zPTj0A @JaneFriedman
12 Ways to Help Your Friends’ Pre-Release Promotion Efforts: http://bit.ly/ArngG3 @KeliGwyn
Learning tension from hoaxes of the past–part of the Designing from the Bones series from @GeneLempp: http://bit.ly/xa7CIa
6 Steps to Getting Started With Google+: http://bit.ly/y99FSp @smexaminer
An agent reminds us that trends started years before: http://bit.ly/z59QSM @greyhausagency
2 Surefire Symptoms of a Static Character: http://bit.ly/zhc3Ai @KMWeiland
5 productivity tips for writers: http://bit.ly/yuP2PR @MsAnnAguirre
What Is Your Online Avatar Saying About You? http://bit.ly/xRRj2D @catseyewriter
The Counter-Intuitive Benefits of Small Time Blocks: http://bit.ly/AyMB1U @RealLifeE
Culture-building through Holidays: http://bit.ly/xbUi2G @AmyJRoseDavis
New Fight Breaks Out Over Digital Rights to Old Books: http://bit.ly/xR9yYx @PassiveVoiceBlg
Character vs. Plot vs. Language: http://bit.ly/ymnPdS @BookishWallace
Short Stories as Marketing Tools: http://bit.ly/xfaNkZ @howtowriteshop
Blog Trolls–How to Spot Them & What To Do: http://bit.ly/xdfQWM @KristenLambTX
How to Write a Novel Based on a True Story: http://bit.ly/xkBA5U @HarlowCoban
The Business of Character Engagement: http://bit.ly/wjGyBa @jhansenwrites
Tips for setting up a blog tour: http://bit.ly/z2kM17 @spunkonastick
Responsible Reviewing: http://bit.ly/yZLnvi @authorterryo
Tips for eliminating echoes in our writing: http://bit.ly/zeudv4
Examining our ideas to ensure they’re genuinely original: http://bit.ly/ApfPNh @SarahAHoyt
Staying True to Your Characters: http://bit.ly/zUJtqo @AnnetteLyon
Konrath’s successful last 3 weeks with epub: http://bit.ly/wNLzZH @jakonrath
Worldbuilding–how romantic partners meet, expectations for relationships, etc.: http://bit.ly/zHx763 @JulietteWade
Freelance Life: The Right Tools: http://bit.ly/x48tiv @writertank
Guest Blogging Etiquette 101: http://bit.ly/ykJtEL @roniloren
Publishers Rearranging the Deck Chairs on the Titanic: http://bit.ly/xSejs9 @PassiveVoiceBlg
Why 1 authors isn’t fond of writing groups: http://bit.ly/x3NtNv @mykecole
What Makes a Great First Sentence? http://bit.ly/yAsO48 @Ava_Jae
1 writer’s experiences during the past decade of publishing: http://bit.ly/y75VYG @marilynpeake
For the Resolute at New Year’s: Promises, Process, and Progress: http://bit.ly/ApBYCL @SarahAveryBooks
6 reasons to write flawed characters: http://bit.ly/yDWdUw @LyndaRYoung
Writing tension–giving readers something to worry about: http://bit.ly/xWChv1 @JodieRennerEd
Should Authors Add a Paypal Donation Button to Their Sites? http://bit.ly/y7a3Qe @GoblinWriter
The Question You Should Ask Before You Ask “What if?” http://bit.ly/zMOcsX @storyfix
An Interview with editor Alan Rinzler: http://bit.ly/A3FOgY @CAMorganti
Types of rights for writers: http://bit.ly/zjVwiq @querytracker
You Are Exactly Where You Need To Be: http://bit.ly/w5XpaS @AKathrynTrombly
A post on horror writer R.L. Stine: http://bit.ly/AasgWZ @writersdigest
BookStoreMarketing.net: Beware Spam PR Services: http://bit.ly/ACFHbF @victoriastrauss
How cliches can actually be useful: http://bit.ly/z5Jf2k @storykim
Songwriters : 6 Traits of A Badly Written Song: http://bit.ly/wcCxM1 @usasong
Songwriters : The Dos and Don’ts of Co-Writing: http://bit.ly/y4NY5e @edusongwriter
Tips for writing emotion: http://bit.ly/xRvCy1 @katepaulk
11 ways to make a memorable impression at a writers’ conference: http://bit.ly/x4LGaj @kirklandatlarge
How to make good writing great: http://bit.ly/AyOSQG @jammer0501
Writing fighting–12 things writers should know: http://bit.ly/zwAQ62 @ajackwriting
Why your book needs a sell sheet and how to make one: http://bit.ly/ADTzFh @BryanThomasS
Sensory Tips for the Distracted Writer: http://bit.ly/ACJGl3 @ThereseWalsh
How Writing Groups Can Work for You: http://bit.ly/zXpsSA @2KoP for @writeitsideways
How Tightly Do You Control Your Blog? http://bit.ly/y24ZLB @jamigold
Usage tips of common tech terms in our writing: http://bit.ly/y0I8pk @writing_tips
What writers really need: http://bit.ly/z53coo @billycoffey for @rachellegardner
5 Writing Prompts to Overcome Writer’s Block: http://bit.ly/xK54go @write_practice
What NOT to do With Your Press Release: http://bit.ly/zePHnk @FriesenPress
Crime fiction–when suspects get off on the wrong foot with investigators: http://bit.ly/zcXOBf @mkinberg
Calendars for organizing writing and life: http://bit.ly/AwxB3f
Social media is not direct sales: http://bit.ly/A7N0G0 @KristenLambTX
5 Literary Devices to Make You a Better Writer: http://bit.ly/w2D3zm @nickdaws
Top 5 Miscast Literary Roles: http://bit.ly/AlObOw @NewDorkReview
Does EPub Change the 32-Page Illustrated Picture Book? http://bit.ly/wUTCLw
9 ways to make an idea your own: http://bit.ly/xzGkMN @sarahahoyt
7 Blog Mistakes That Drive Readers Nuts: http://bit.ly/wtL55P @pushingsocial
Walls on the Path to Publication: a Necessity or a Nuisance? http://bit.ly/xDzkKN @JodyHedlund
Categorizing your book: http://bit.ly/w48eWz @Bookendsjessica
5 hidden elements that help us effectively tell our stories: http://bit.ly/yvd7km
10 Ways To Get More Email Subscribers For Your Blog: http://bit.ly/xnP3To @problogger
A sf/f writer experiments in literary thinking: http://bit.ly/Ap8TIu @JulietteWade
Investing in Your Own Future: http://bit.ly/yoawdC @deanwesleysmith
How much promotion is too much? http://bit.ly/wfSMWr @nicolamorgan
Print and eBook Covers, a Matter of Resolution: http://bit.ly/wuM0PE @JFBookman
10 Resolutions for Self-Publishers in 2012: http://bit.ly/yLOLWI @pubperspectives
3 Ways to Handle Time in a Novel: http://bit.ly/zn8RLF
Magic systems: http://bit.ly/yrk3mw
2 tricky areas for writers–dialogue and description: http://bit.ly/wgOKyR
CreateSpace Ins and Outs: http://bit.ly/yriUmJ @Desertwriter
Live coverage of cons #wdc12 (today/Fri.) and #dbw12 (Mon.) & #dbwsum (Mon.) by @Porter_Anderson with roundup here: PorterAnderson.com
Editors under marketing’s thumb, poorly digitized trad. titles, scarcity as a biz model, Apple gossip: http://bit.ly/yDFjur @Porter_Anderson
Writing on the Ether’s @Porter_Anderson features @SheilaB01 @namenick @lizcastro @JulieBertagna @jeffjohnroberts : http://bit.ly/yDFjur
When Loved Ones Don’t Love Your Book: http://bit.ly/zEyRXb @wckdwriter
Making writing goals using the S.M.A.R.T. method: http://bit.ly/zpjEf2 @ArtMktgMentor
“Write What You Know” Doesn’t Mean What You Think It Does: http://bit.ly/z9xCpo @fuelyourwriting
Put Your Reader in Your POV Character’s Skin: http://bit.ly/yi1gI2 @jhansenwrites
Editing out ‘as’: http://bit.ly/yJLdop
The Pros and Cons of Comparing Yourself to Other Writers: http://bit.ly/w3T9yC @KMWeiland
Ebooks Outsell Print For Majority Of Titles On USA Today Bestseller List: http://bit.ly/zvBFcK @laurahazardowen
How to maintain a creative, healthy perspective: http://bit.ly/yLxbmv @tannerc
Know The Business *Before* You Get Too Far In: http://bit.ly/z87fU7 @greyhausagency
Authors, Bad Reviews, and Bad Reactions: http://bit.ly/xVr0Yu @CassandraNeace
Pandora’s box about to be reopened: Who owns erights to old books? http://bit.ly/xTOZBW @PassiveVoiceBlg
Women and Men, and Cover Art: http://bit.ly/xJWsmN @ocelott @jimchines
Why Use Present Tense? http://bit.ly/wfVf95 @Ava_Jae
10 Ways to Improve Your Writing While Thinking Like a Comedy Writer: http://bit.ly/Aw0ifq @lajfun
What mystery writers should know about the brain: http://bit.ly/AjJhgR @JungleReds
Places to find writers online: http://bit.ly/zvY6jc

Finding Writers Online

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

100_5048If you’re a new writer or have recently decided to spend more time writing, you might be looking for other writers online.

Plugging into the online writing community can be very helpful for writers. Finding support and encouragement is probably the main reason, with accessing resources a close second.

I’ve recently been asked by a few newer writers where to find other writers online. There’s not one main watering hole. Here are some of the places writers hang out online:

Twitter: There are tons of writers on Twitter. If you put #amwriting or #writetips or #writechat into the search box on your home page, you’ll find writers. Or go to my followers. Almost all of them are writers.

Blogs: Blogs are great places to connect with other writers (find active blogs to follow, then branch out and follow folks in their blog rolls.) There are plenty of writing blogs in my sidebar to get you started.

Forums: Absolute Write , Writers Net, and Writing Forums, among others, connect writers with each other and with resources and information.

There are also Yahoo Groups that operate on an email loop (or you can choose to visit the group’s board). Just go to http://groups.yahoo.com/ and search for “writing” or the genre of your choice.

Facebook: Writers are all over Facebook. What I’d recommend is finding a blogging writer who has a Facebook account, friend them, then go to their followers’ list. You’re sure to find other writers there to friend….then repeat the process.

National organizations (USA): The Authors Guild is the oldest of the organizations for published authors. There are also many groups that are genre-specific: SCBWI (Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators), RWA (Romance Writers of America), MWA (Mystery Writers of America), ITW (International Thriller Writers), HWA (Horror Writers Association), Sisters in Crime, etc.

There are also local writing organizations. Some writers find it very rewarding to connect with other writers in person and exchange ideas about writing, publishing, and marketing. If you’re looking for an in-person group, it’s worth the few minutes to pop over to Meetup.com and type in ‘critique group’ and your location to see if there are groups in your area.

Writers conferences are a good, if frequently costly, way to meet other writers. Or you can participate in a free online writing conference like The Muse Online or challenges like the annual National Novel Writing Month and make writing friends there.

There are probably gobs of other places that I’m not mentioning here. Where are some of your favorite places to hang out with writers?

Calendars for Organizing Writing and Life

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

imagesI’m always interested in finding new ways to get organized and take more control over my day.

Although I’ve been busier than ever with my writing and family life, my productivity has improved in all the different areas I’m juggling—home, as well as writing.

I’m pretty sure it’s because of my calendar.

The last time (April 2011) I wrote on this topic, I was still using a variety of different calendars—a wall calendar, a day-planner style calendar, and an online calendar.

A few months ago, I started using Google Calendar for almost everything. Lists of things to do, grocery lists, remembering the dog’s heart-worm pill…and now blog post ideas (as a sort of informal editorial calendar.) I’ve even put my supper plan on my calendar for each day–it reminds me to take whatever the meat is out of the freezer the night before to defrost in the fridge overnight.

I’ve also tried to go, if not paper-free, then paper-reduced. When the children bring home flyers from school or their activities, I transcribe the important bits into my Google calendar and then recycle the paper.

There are tons of calendar apps out there, but the point is to have something that you can easily change, update, and carry with you. It doesn’t have to be Google. When someone asks me now if I can drive children home from play practice/driver’s ed/elementary school, I take a look at my phone. Because Lord knows I can’t remember what I’m doing from one day to the next.

I also took this a step farther with my writing…with some excellent results so far. I’ve mentioned that I hate outlines, but I do love knowing what I’m planning on writing the next day. With my schedule, I need to hop right into the book when I find 15 free minutes. If I use those 15 minutes trying to figure out what scene I need to pick up with, and what I’m trying to accomplish, the writing time is quickly over without my doing any actual writing. So now I jot a line or two on my calendar to remind myself where I want to go with my story the next time I pick it up. If that 10 minutes of time happens to be while I’m waiting for my son to walk out of his high school, then I have my plan for the writing day with me on my phone…and I start right in.

Another nice thing is that this calendar is on a cloud. I can access it from anywhere. If I lose my phone or drop my phone in the sink or something, I can still recover my calendar. If I’m traveling, my calendar is accessible and able to be updated.

One other note–I’m trying an experiment with my calendar….working on more than 1 project at a time. I have two books due at nearly the same time this year, and I’ve never before been able to work on more than one book at a time. But if I’m being this organized and if I plan the next day’s writing for both books, I’m curious to see if it will work better. I’ll report back on the experiment later.

How are you staying organized and juggling all the things you need to do? Are you a calendar-user, too? What other tools do you use?

Eliminating Echoes in Our Writing

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

P4020070I recently got my copyedited manuscript back for the first Southern quilting mystery, which is releasing in June.

I was pleased with the lack of mark-ups on the manuscript. It was probably the cleanest doc I’ve ever gotten back.

Except for one major thing.

I had the most echoes I’d ever seen. Actually, it was an embarrassing number of echoes.

Editors (at least mine at Penguin), refer to repeated words as echoes. Echoes haven’t usually been an issue for me. And this manuscript was full of them.

I think it might be due to the number of times I picked up and put down the document while writing it. I had a full schedule at the time and wrote in very small chunks of time. That approach worked well, in terms of getting the book written. But, since I make a point of not reading what I wrote the previous day, this meant that sometimes I reused words that I’d just written (that I guess were fresh in my mind from the day before.)

An example from the first page of my manuscript: I reference a wild looking woman at the protagonist’s front door. Five lines later: I describe the woman’s wildly colored, mismatched clothes.

Some other repeated words: disastrous and disaster (4 lines apart), quickly (4 lines apart), chilled and chill (10 lines apart), honestly (2 lines apart), normally (2 lines apart), running late and run by (in the same line)….yes, the list goes on!

Amazingly, neither my agent nor my senior editor noticed the echoes in a read-though…but they were reading for content in those passes. Which just goes to show that copyeditors are worth their salt—and that we all can miss echoes unless we’re making special passes for them.

On the upside—they’re extremely easy to fix. I’d corrected the entire manuscript and returned it to my editor in just about 30 minutes. But I felt sorry for the poor copyeditor.

I’ve caught my own echoes before—that’s why I’ve never had a book returned to me with so many. These are the ways I’ve found them (and I use the same method to locate other errors):

Read aloud: You can either read your book aloud to yourself or load the manuscript on your e-reader and have the device read aloud to you.

Read in a different font: This drives me nuts after a while, but if I only plan on editing a chapter, I’ll put the one chapter in a different font. It makes the words look different and gives me a little distance from the document.

Use beta readers: Sometimes my betas will find these types of errors.

Make a special pass: This is my plan for my next manuscript. I’m going to make a special pass through the document, looking especially for echoes.

How do you find errors like echoes in your drafts?

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