I’ll be back on Sunday with Twitterific, but will be on break until then. I’m suddenly the aunt of twins. :)
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Jump Back Into Your Story
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
If life hasn’t hijacked your writing schedule, then you’ve either been very lucky or else you haven’t been writing for very long.
Writing first thing in the day helps with this—but it’s not a sure-fire fix, either.
The important thing is not to let our falling behind completely shut us down.
I’m probably about 8 or 9 pages behind right now on my current project after a wild last week. I wrote every day, but I couldn’t make my daily goal. What I’ll be doing this week:
Jumping back into our story:
Consider limited Re-reading: The worst part is losing the story thread. I’ll usually read the last couple of pages and just forge ahead. If I poke around too long in past pages, I start getting my editor hat on. For me, that kills the creative process. But every writer is different. And this is harder to do if you’re way behind.
Timer: I’ll write as quickly as I can for 10 minutes. I won’t worry about if it’s something that’s going to need to be cut later. The important thing is making process on the story…mentally, that’s important. The next day, the writing will be more focused.
Lists: At the very least, sit down and make a list for options for your next scene, options for your character’s development, options for the next big conflict. Get your mind back into the story again.
Silence your inner critic: It’s not doing us any good.
Don’t try to catch up: It’s not fun to meet your daily goal and then write more than that to satisfy your catch-up goal. If I’m not close to a deadline (and right now I’m not), then I’m going to forget about those 8 or 9 pages I’m behind on. Each day is an opportunity to meet that day’s goal.
The important thing is to pick up our story again. It might be that the only way of doing that means taking a small notebook on the go to jot down story notes. I’m doing that today when I take my kids to their dentist appointment. Just figure out a way to fit it in.
How do you jump back into your story after a break?
Image: Flickr: Hamad AL-Mohannna
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Twitterific is a compilation of all the writing links I shared the previous week.
The links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base
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Have a great week!
Science Fiction Is Here, It’s Just Not Evenly Distributed: http://bit.ly/MBZfUA @timmaughan @worldsf
Goal, Motivation, and Conflict: http://bit.ly/RtIVub @stdennard
Market the author or market the book? http://bit.ly/RtJ2pB @nicolamorgan
Writing from the discomfort zone: http://bit.ly/RtJG6h @writerunboxed
Tips for avoiding passive voice construction: http://bit.ly/R7hSVG @LauraHoward78
Plan a D.I.Y. Writing Fellowship: http://bit.ly/RtKiJ8 @grubwriters
The Possessive Apostrophe: http://bit.ly/RtKs3e @mesummerbooks
5 Things You Shouldn’t Say To The Librarian Who Is Also A Writer: http://bit.ly/RtKwA9 @mistymassey
The joys of private writing: http://bit.ly/RtKJmU @MarkCN @UKTor
The importance of reading to writers: http://bit.ly/RtKWq9 @jodyhedlund
5 ways writers can minimize essential writing tasks: http://bit.ly/RtLe0c
A post on using 99 Designs to find a cover artist: http://bit.ly/P29BPC @woodwardkaren
Tips to Prevent and Overcome Writers Block: http://bit.ly/P29Hqv
Plot and Story Structure – More Lessons from ThrillerFest: http://bit.ly/P29R1k @DiyMfa
A Facebook Optimization Tip: http://bit.ly/P29YcZ @authormedia
Women Writers in the Republic of Congo: http://bit.ly/P2amZh @womenwriters @Victoria_Writes
Hacking Creativity: http://bit.ly/P2aPKS
Publisher as bully: http://bit.ly/N6Dwo6 @Porter_Anderson @philipdsjones @doctorow
Setting as character: http://bit.ly/P2aWWP @fantasyfaction
5 Secrets to Help You Stay Busy AND Sane as a Writer: http://bit.ly/P2b9sY @NickThacker
How to Promote Your Book with Social Media: http://bit.ly/P2brQK @womenwriters @ZimblerMiller
What readers want in a heroine: http://bit.ly/P2bH2e @wordforteens
What if your inciting incident is a coincidence? http://bit.ly/P2bYC5 @glencstrathy
Is Kickstarter a viable tool for writers? http://bit.ly/P2cvE8 @litreactor @robwhart
3 Easy Tricks for Better Dialogue: http://bit.ly/NtU3D3 @tiffanyreisz @janice_hardy
It’s not all about the writing–skills that modern writers need: http://bit.ly/RI0XKK
Promoting Your Book Starts with Your Query: http://bit.ly/RI1eNT @4YaLit
Weave subplots around your main plot: http://bit.ly/RI1lc0
Big follower numbers don’t necessarily equal big sales: http://bit.ly/MZ3xXC @courtneymilan @adrienehill @Porter_Anderson
1 writer talks about the biggest mistake of her career: http://bit.ly/RI1OLv
4 tips for writing a book that will hold teens’ attention: http://bit.ly/RI22lF @sarahmussi
Why 1 blogger stopped using Feedburner: http://bit.ly/RI250R @janefriedman
Loyalty as a theme in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/PoK2sc @mkinberg
Do agents represent freelancers? http://bit.ly/RI29Ob @writersdigest
Is Omniscient POV Dying? http://bit.ly/RI2dxk @MarcyKennedy
How To Write For The Promotional Items Industry: http://bit.ly/RI3ftp @karencv
Who vs. that: http://bit.ly/RI3jJs
Can sympathy purchasing save bookstores?Should it? http://bit.ly/MZWNrl @Porter_Anderson @sarahrcallender@Victoria_Noe
10 Reasons Authors Should Format Old Novels as eBooks: http://bit.ly/RI3nJe @AdriennedeWolfe
Pre-release marketing key to promo success: http://bit.ly/RI3qom @duolit
How To Get Great Photos For Your Blog Without Breaking Copyright Laws: http://bit.ly/RI3u7E @KristinNador
Social isn’t a magic bullet, but it can sell books: http://bit.ly/RI3ynS @thefuturebook @thecreativepenn
Tips for getting your Facebook page noticed: http://bit.ly/RI3DYT
11 tips for writing a book: http://bit.ly/RI3DYT @NYTimes @colsonwhitehead
4 ways to plan surprises in your novel: http://bit.ly/RI43OZ @donmaass
Don’t Forget the Dialogue: http://bit.ly/RI47yc @kmweiland
The hybrid career of a popular author: http://bit.ly/Np8OKB @cjlyonswriter @thecreativepenn
Make-or-Break Verbs: http://nyti.ms/Np938A @sinandsyntax
A free directory of #ebook pros–for covers, editing, formatting, & more: http://tinyurl.com/3mxg5zt #epub
Publishers don’t realize they already have social media expertise: http://bit.ly/N9kihs @dennisyu @porter_anderson
Finding the right place to set your story: http://bit.ly/Np9Rua @KayKeppler
How One Editor Learned to Edit Herself: http://bit.ly/Np9Zde @emilywenstrom @janice_hardy
Varieties of Female Villains: http://bit.ly/NpatzX @LBardugo
Learning Writing Skills from the film Hancock: http://bit.ly/NpavI3
A Myth Studies Reading List for Fantasy Writers: http://bit.ly/NpaOCG @LBGale
How To Use A Camera To Bring Your Fiction Into Focus: http://bit.ly/NpaVhN @fuelyourwriting
The fantasy feminist: http://bit.ly/Npbd8m @fantasyfaction
What’s Life Really Like as a Published Author? http://bit.ly/NpbrvZ @JodyHedlund
Tips for faster writing: http://bit.ly/NpbA2G @sinandsyntax
5 Ways to Boost Creativity: http://bit.ly/N5abLX @manon_eileen
Create a Freelance Writing Resume: http://bit.ly/QRP1op
Tips for pitching book bloggers: http://bit.ly/QRPd76 @YAHighway
Save Your Creative Life In One Hour Or Less–Back Up Your Work: http://bit.ly/QRPerL
Basic Writing : From Pre-Writing to Editing: http://bit.ly/NjjsVl
Tips for writing great sentences: http://bit.ly/NjjvAj
Learning the craft takes time–enjoy the process: http://bit.ly/NjjE6I @livewritethrive
Omniscient POV: http://bit.ly/NjjLiL
LendInk–legit e-lending, not a pirate site: http://bit.ly/N6Dwo6 @Porter_Anderson @markcoker @mathewi
Tips for writing book reviews: http://bit.ly/NjjSLb
Crafting effective heroes: http://bit.ly/NjjZqj @storyfix
Tips for writing subtext: http://bit.ly/NjkbWw
7 Ways to Use Brain Science to Hook Readers: http://bit.ly/NjkiRP @LisaCron
Prequels, Sequels, Novellas…The Ebook Deluge: http://bit.ly/NjkqAO
3 Ways to Mess with Genre: http://bit.ly/NjktfT @LBGale
Why Great Ideas Get Rejected: http://bit.ly/Njkv7x @LDRLB
In The E-Book World, Are Book Covers A Dying Art? http://n.pr/Njkz7n @nprbooks
The Most Trying Part of Living a Good Story: http://bit.ly/NjkAbr @jeffgoins
3 Steps to Making Friends & Enemies at Writers Conferences: http://bit.ly/NjkQap @victoriamixon
Elements of Fantasy – Frogs: http://bit.ly/NjkSis @fantasyfaction
Using KDP Select as a marketing tool: http://bit.ly/NjlFzO @copyblogger @jeffgoins
An overlooked essential skill for writers: http://bit.ly/NjmtF0 @Tsuchigari
Writing Tip: Hurt ‘Em: http://bit.ly/NjmA3w @threekingsbooks
Form rejections: http://bit.ly/NjmBEo @janelebak
5 Keys to Writing Success: http://bit.ly/NjmFUJ @KristenLambTX
7 Benefits Of An Author Collective: http://bit.ly/NjmIjs @thecreativepenn
An agent on rejections and rude agents: http://bit.ly/NjmOaN @breeogden
The Dearth-of-Epic-Endings Epidemic: http://bit.ly/Njn0a3 @aimeelsalter
You only get one start – make the most of it: http://bit.ly/Njn89A @jaelmchenry
How to Choose a POV Character: http://bit.ly/Njna0U @ava_jae
The Self-Contained Narrator: http://bit.ly/Njne0X
Big follower numbers don’t necessarily equal big sales: http://bit.ly/MZ3xXC @courtneymilan @adrienehill @Porter_Anderson
Private Inspiration Boards (Alternatives to Pinterest): http://bit.ly/Njni0r @roniloren
Establishing tone: http://bit.ly/NjnpsV @mooderino
10 lit devices and where to find them in SF: http://bit.ly/NjqqJY @annaleen
Killing Your Sales One Shot at a Time: http://bit.ly/NjquJw @deanwesleysmith
Infographic of Edgar Allan Poe’s grisly death scenes: http://bit.ly/Njr9ur @guardianbooks
What 1 writer won’t do to sell more books: http://bit.ly/Njrcqm @nicolamorgan
10 best end-of-world novels: http://bit.ly/Njrr4s @flavorpill
8 Romantic Readings from Contemporary Literature: http://bit.ly/NjrBcm @bookriot
68 Queries In 60 Minutes: http://bit.ly/NjrGg6
The internet is not a neighborhood in need of door-to-door salesmen: http://bit.ly/NjrLQO @SeananMcGuire
What’s With Writers and Late Blooming? http://bit.ly/NjrNYQ @debraeve
How To Make Your Own Book Trailers: http://bit.ly/NjrPA6 @bubblecow
Storyboarding 101: http://bit.ly/NjrQE6
Does the Future of Publishing Need More Imagination? http://bit.ly/NjrWeR @jeffvandermeer
Putting the “Social” Back in Social Media: http://bit.ly/OTAUvk @jodyhedlund
5 Ways to Build a Pinterest Following With Facebook: http://bit.ly/OTAXap @smexaminer
The New Publishing Paradigm: What Value Do Publishers Add? http://bit.ly/OTAXXW @jamigold
Goodreads v. LibraryThing: http://bit.ly/OTB4Tj @deadwhiteguys
Mental Health Series for Writers: Panic Attacks: http://bit.ly/OTBcCn @kristinnador
Audition Your Cast of Characters: http://bit.ly/OTBb1j @juliemusil
Are you writing a dystopian? A checklist: http://bit.ly/QXaP23 @sarahlapolla
A look at NetGalley for reviews: http://bit.ly/QXb64V @jhansenwrites
Tone in fiction: http://bit.ly/QXbh05 @theresastevens
Chapter titles? http://bit.ly/QXbtfO @juliettewade
Which vs. That: http://bit.ly/QXbznA @writersdigest
5 ways to increase productivity: http://bit.ly/QXbNLw @manon_eileen
Jack London’s Advice on Honing Your Creative Craft: http://bit.ly/OzEV7Y @mcd_owell
5 Scenes Every Romance Novel Needs: http://bit.ly/NFkRiT @howtowriteshop
Science Fiction Is Here, It’s Just Not Evenly Distributed: http://bit.ly/MBZfUA @timmaughan @worldsf
5 Tips For Making a Living as a Writer: http://bit.ly/OOGNMU @rachellegardner
The villain’s journey: http://bit.ly/NXVK0y @diymfa
11 tips for writing a book: http://bit.ly/RI3DYT @NYTimes @colsonwhitehead
How One Editor Learned to Edit Herself: http://bit.ly/Np9Zde @emilywenstrom @janice_hardy
What 1 writer won’t do to sell more books: http://bit.ly/Njrcqm @nicolamorgan
Publishers don’t realize they already have social media expertise: http://bit.ly/N9kihs @dennisyu @porter_anderson
The Dearth-of-Epic-Endings Epidemic: http://bit.ly/Njn0a3 @aimeelsalter
11 top authors with their tips for writing a great novel: http://on.wsj.com/r0BTJR @wsj
Can readers trust online book reviews? http://bit.ly/OoqGo5 @ninabadzin
What’s Uplifting About Depressing Fiction? http://bit.ly/OoqMMv @btmargins
When Mainstream Publishers Do SFF: http://bit.ly/OoqTrc @jdiddyesquire
How to survive the creative life: http://bit.ly/OoqZ2f @chuckwendig {lang}
Tips for collaborative writing: http://bit.ly/Oor5GU @MsAnnAguirre
10 reasons writers get writer’s block: http://bit.ly/Oorj0K @JulieBMack
Mirror scenes and weak writing: http://bit.ly/OorrgX
The Girlfriend’s Guide to Being a Debut Author: http://bit.ly/OoryJ9
Being male is not a prerequisite for hard SF: http://bit.ly/OorzNo @guardianbooks
Author FAQs (tips for answering wannabe writer questions): http://bit.ly/OorCZD
12 Non-Negotiable Elements of Force in Writing: http://bit.ly/OorJEn @writing_tips
Are You Hitting a Bulls Eye With Your Target Audience? http://bit.ly/OorNUJ @melissaknorris
Point of View in Genre Fiction: http://bit.ly/OorPvR
The epidemic of niceness in online book culture: http://slate.me/OorZ6j @silvermanjacob
3 reasons more people should focus on their writing: http://bit.ly/Oos6Pg @nickthacker
Passive Voice and Writers
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Today I’m over at Laura Howard’s Finding Bliss blog. I’m going to be talking about passive voice—a tricky subject and one that’s frequently misunderstood by writers. Hope you’ll pop over!
Keeping Our Books Current—Or At Least Not Dating Them
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
One of the hazards of reading so many blogs is that I find out about a lot of fantastic-sounding books. I have a lot of to-be-read books on my Kindle and an even longer list of books that I plan to read.
I’m a very fast reader, but I’m wondering if my list of books can possibly be read in a year or two—if I stop putting new books on it.
Right now, I’m reading a book that mystery writer Margot Kinberg recommended back in February of last year. :)
The book is Josephine Tey’s The Man in the Queue, which was first published in 1929. It’s been a very interesting and enjoyable read so far.
I loved the feeling of being taken back in time with this book. It opens with a line of people waiting to enter a popular show that has a very Vaudeville feel to it.
The police investigation that’s portrayed is, of course, completely different from our modern day methods. There aren’t any police cars—they’re walking or taking the train as they work the case.
This is the enjoyable part of reading a book set in a different time—being transported back in a time machine. This is what I’m expecting and enjoying most about reading a book that launched in 1929. It’s the same enjoyment I get from watching a costume drama at the movies or even from watching black and white films from the 1950s.
It’s a little different when something brings me to a full-stop in a book or movie. That’s when I’m taken out of the experience and am trying to figure out what’s going on.
With Tey’s book, it was a term she used to describe the murder victim: Levantine.
At first, I tried my usual tricks to figure out the word—looked at the context, etc. Then I just skipped over it, hoping I wasn’t missing something important to do with the mystery.
But darned if she didn’t repeat that word over and over again in the next few pages, referred to the victim as a Levantine. Then I remembered that my Kindle had a handy dictionary so I right-clicked on the word and the definition came up.
Le·van·tine CHIEFLY ARCHAIC adj. of or trading to the Levant: the Levantine coast. ■ n. a person who lives in or comes from the Levant.
(2010-04-01). The New Oxford American Dictionary (Kindle Locations 470127-470142). Oxford University Press. Kindle Edition.
I hope I’m not the only one who doesn’t know where the Levant is/was. I had to look that up, too:
Le·vant ARCHAIC the eastern part of the Mediterranean with its islands and neighboring countries.
late 15th cent.: from French, literally “rising,” present participle of lever “to lift” used as a noun in the sense “point of sunrise, east.” (2010-04-01). The New Oxford American Dictionary (Kindle Locations 470088-470099). Oxford University Press. Kindle Edition.
So—an archaic reference. Definitely something I’d want to avoid having in my own books! All the books I’ve written are available as ebooks. To me, this means that they’re going to be around for a long time and potentially read by people after I’m long dead. With any luck.
Of course, we’ve always had the ability to read very old books. But now, digital books provide an even greater chance that our books will be read far into the future. They’re going to be more easily available.
It would be impossible (nearly impossible—I’ve tried) to write a book relevant to modern life without including any modern devices. But naturally, mentioning modern devices dates the books. And I’m writing for today’s reader, primarily.
Old references to technology, to me, date the books in a charming, period-piece way. As long as the references aren’t huge stumbling blocks.
What I am trying to do, though, is construct my sentences so that a reader could get the experience of living in the early 21st century, but hopefully not be completely confused by what they’re reading. And still make sure I’m not irritating today’s readers by over-explaining anything.
I’ve used the word Twitter in one of my books, but I’m thinking in future I might skip references to a particular platform. Because although Twitter is a strong pop-culture reference right now, who knows what will happen to it in the future.
I’m trying to avoid slang and pop culture references that seem micro-trendy.
I’m making sure that there’s enough context around any technology mentions so that a reader could figure out the type of technology I’m talking about. Without annoying modern day readers.
Basically, I’m just trying to make sure there’s nothing in the books that will ever stop a reader completely cold.
I’ve recently heard, on email loops I’m a member of, of some authors who uploaded their backlist to Amazon and edited their books when they did—removing dated references from past decades.
There’s definitely some charm in reading books set in the past, so I didn’t think the authors necessarily had to update their books. But—I did make a couple of changes to Dyeing Shame when I self-published it from backlist. Just a couple of things that jumped out at me as dated when I was reading through the book that I’d originally written in 2002ish.
I really hesitated recently when I structured a murder mystery around a postal carrier as a victim (for a book for Penguin that’s coming out next year.) With all the troubles for the US Postal Service, I wondered if I were dating my book before it even released.
But then I decided that would be a reference that would date the book in a pleasant way instead of a confusing one. My editor seemed to agree with me.
How much has the shift to digital (and the longevity of books) changed the way you write modern-day references into your novels?
Image: Daniel Moyle


