Save the Cat

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
Save the Cat--Blake SnyderI’ve been hearing about the book Save the Cat by Blake Snyder for a long time.  Probably the last few years, actually.

It was one of those things where I kept meaning to buy it, kept hearing about it, but I didn’t have a direct buy-link to the book.  (So…if you’re like me, here you are: Save the Cat Kindle, Save the Cat Nook, Save the Cat print.)

It’s a helpful book.  I can definitely see what all the hoopla is about.  It’s written by a screenwriter for screenwriters—but the methods are applicable for novelists.

I think another reason I resisted buying this book is because I have my writing method fairly well-developed for my series.  I know how I structure a traditional mystery. 

The book does offer help for structuring a novel.  But the thing I found the most helpful was a very short section where Blake Snyder actually brought up the “save the cat” approach that the title alludes to.

Snyder said that it was incredibly important for your audience (he, naturally, means filmgoers, but it works for readers) to like or at least pull for your protagonist.  He casually mentions the importance of making your protagonist do something likeable in one of the first scenes of your film/novel.

This sounds incredibly simple (and is incredibly simple), but I’d never thought of it in such a concrete or deliberate way before.

One of my series, the Myrtle Clover mysteries, has a…well, let’s call Myrtle difficult.  She’s a difficult octogenarian sleuth.  I love Myrtle.  Many readers love Myrtle and write to me about Myrtle and ask me when the next Myrtle book is coming out.

Some readers think Myrtle should be locked in a retirement home and have the key thrown away. They don’t hesitate to let me know this in the reviews.  :)

So…you love her or you hate her.  I understand this.  There are people I know who are similar to Myrtle.

But you want readers to at least pull for your character.  You don’t want them to give up on your book.  So,  Snyder’s advice is to throw in a scene that displays the protagonist in a good light….early

So, when readers are trying to decide if they want to invest their hard-earned free time with your character for the next few days or week, we’re giving them a reason to stick with them.

Before reading this book, I’d definitely thrown in a scene or two with a softer Myrtle at some point in the mystery. But usually it wasn’t near the start of the story.

Myrtle will continue being difficult, past her Save-the-Cat scene.  But I’ll be interested in seeing if she has more converts with this approach. 

How do you soften your difficult characters?  Have you read Save the Cat?

Discovering What Deights–Reader Feedback

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Photo by AcrylicArtist

Sometimes it takes other people to point out something special.

My daughter recently had a friend over, and I was making the girls some snacks.  Our kitchen adjoins an eating area with a bay window that overlooks our backyard.

We have six bird feeders that we keep filled.  One, a hummingbird feeder, attaches to the bay window and provides endless entertainment for our cats.  The hummingbirds are fun to watch–feisty, fast, voracious.  The cats forget the screens are in and try to catch them, leaping at the screens with paws outstretched.  We see the birds from early April through October before they fly off to Mexico for the winter.

Much as they entertain us, after a while, they do fade to the background…just like the rest of the backyard. Basically, they become just an attractive wallpaper. 

They weren’t wallpaper for my daughter’s friend.

I was shaking popcorn into bowls when the little girl gasped.  “Mrs. Craig! Mrs. Craig!” she ran over to me, wide-eyed with excitement. She grabbed my arm.  “Look!”

I figured there must be a large snake outside, so I didn’t even glance in the direction of the feeder.  “No, look!” she said, pointing to the hummingbirds.

Through her eyes, I saw the wonder of the amazing little creatures again. 

Of course I told her how glad I was she thought they were special.  I explained what they were and gave a little information about hummingbirds.  She avidly watched them for a long while.

Sometimes we lose perspective with our stories, too.  The plot and the characters become wallpaper to us.  We know we need an extra set of eyes to find the problems with our book–the plot holes, the echoes of repeated words, the loose ends we forget to tie up.

But it’s just as important to have that extra set of eyes to find what’s right with our story–what’s special.  A turn of phrase, a genuine character, a well-drawn villain. The hours of editing can make us lose perspective on the good parts, too.  We need to know what works so that we can provide more of it.

What are the hummingbirds in your story?

Twitterific

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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7 Rules of Picking Names for Fictional Characters: http://bit.ly/QhGKKq@writersdigest

Resist Giving Characters A Helping Hand: http://bit.ly/Spqgwu@mooderino

5 Ways You’re Preventing Readers From Suspending Disbelief: http://bit.ly/RJosDA@KMWeiland

Pacing for Power–Increasing Tension & Suspense: http://bit.ly/OvTxWF@jodierennered

An Author’s 3rd Option: The Rogue Reader: http://bit.ly/T8dXLD@jasonashlock @Porter_Anderson

Rejection vs. failure: http://bit.ly/UAm949 @AimeeLSalter

The Practice of Writing: http://bit.ly/UAm14K@TrueFactBarFact

Should You Preschedule Tweets? http://bit.ly/OBL1Wa@meghancward

Why wasting time helps you stay sane and productive: http://bit.ly/POfX5j@criticalmargins

5 lessons about the writing community: http://bit.ly/QhJYxq@diymfa

How Having Kids Can Change Your Reading Life: http://bit.ly/SpyzIH@deadwhiteguys

How to Create Conflict in a One Character Scene: http://bit.ly/QhK34g

Writing lessons learned from “Where it Began”: http://bit.ly/QhK48h@juliemusil

“Sparkle”, From Movie to Book: http://bit.ly/QhKbAO@carleenbrice @MyBrownBaby

Should You Sell Books from Your Author Website? http://bit.ly/SpyXGY@authorems

How To Make Writing A Habit Using Rituals: http://bit.ly/QhKdJ0

Heightening emotional impact: http://bit.ly/Spz0mf@juliettewade

Staying Balanced in the Confusing Modern Publishing Industry: http://bit.ly/QhKhbu@jodyhedlund

4 Lessons Authors Can Learn from Obama’s Fake Twitter Followers: http://bit.ly/QdXHTd@authormedia

Top 10 WordPress Security Myths: http://bit.ly/NvNLXU@problogger

One Simple and Incredibly Painful Way to Fix Your Novel Draft: http://bit.ly/QdXWxz@io9

How To Read Amazon Review Graphs: http://bit.ly/NvNXq5@galleycat

7 Questions Every Story Critique Should Answer: http://bit.ly/Qe59Oj@AdriennedeWolfe

How to Use Brainstorming to Edit: http://bit.ly/NvTyN9@ava_jae

Are Amazon reader reviews killing off the critic? http://bit.ly/Qe5f8u@guardianbooks

Why Kindle Direct Publishing Will Transform Indian Self-Publishing: http://bit.ly/NvTFYW@pubperspectives @VinuthaMallya

How to Find Your Character’s Voice: http://bit.ly/Qe5pgb@kmweiland

7 Essential Elements of Scene + Scene Structure Exercise: http://bit.ly/Qe5vnV@plotwhisperer

Keeping Characters True to Themselves: http://bit.ly/Qe5CzY@stdennard @4YALit

10 Creative Writing Ideas for Teens: http://bit.ly/Qe5ErB@tweetthebook

Make your bookshelf searchable by taking a picture with Evernote: http://bit.ly/Qe5IaJ@ebookfriendly

What good dialogue should accomplish: http://bit.ly/NvU2mv@kit_lit

5 Things You DON’T Need to Become a Successful Freelance Writer: http://bit.ly/Qe5Ner

Finding Your Novel’s Theme and Your Universal Theme: http://bit.ly/NvU4e4@roniloren

A 5-Step Plan to Improve Every Blog Post You Write: http://bit.ly/NvU8dU@copyblogger @aliventures

Whose Story is This Anyway? http://bit.ly/Qe5VKX @querytracker

The Art of Subtlety in Fiction: http://bit.ly/NvUfGc@jeanniecampbell

The DNA of a successful ebook: http://on.mash.to/NvUl0H@mashable

A look at character development arcs: http://bit.ly/Qe680N@livewritethrive

A writer shares what’s she’s learned so far: http://bit.ly/NvUpNG@Artzicarol @janice_hardy

Five Creepy Social Media Marketing Tactics: http://bit.ly/Qea1D2@KristenLambTX

How to Read Your Writing in Public: http://bit.ly/Qea7ug@rsquaredd

A Refresher Course On Sentence Types: http://bit.ly/OyulmP@writerscramp1

Competing Goals in Our Story: http://bit.ly/Oyukzb@theresastevens

What to Put Above the Fold on Your Blog, And Why: http://bit.ly/QeafKj@blogtyrant

What to include on your freelance writing resume: http://bit.ly/QeakO7

Being a Pro: One Often Overlooked Issue: http://bit.ly/Qeax3I@AnnetteLyon

3 Fiction Tips from Stephanie Vaughn’s “Dog Heaven”: http://bit.ly/Oyv4Ej@writeitsideways

A closer look at the Amazon review bar graph: http://bit.ly/RVEaLQ@salon

The Good, The Bad, and The Sadly Deluded: Actors Who Write: http://bit.ly/UehO4L@cathinnorway

Fake market or not? How to tell: http://bit.ly/RVEoTn@emergentpublish

12 Writing Prompts/Situations: http://bit.ly/UehUt5

Keeping Up with Your Blog for the Long Haul: http://bit.ly/RVEzxS@JulieBMack

The Editorial Process, Step by Step: http://bit.ly/Uei17X@chavelaque

Identifying your genre: http://bit.ly/RVELNA @museinks

Ebooks For Libraries: http://bit.ly/Uei43O @JAKonrath

A Warning To All Writers Who Need Help Indie Publishing: http://bit.ly/RVEWZl@kristinerusch

What the Romance Genre Can Teach Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers: http://bit.ly/UeibMO @lbgale

Should you always list writing credits in your cover letter? http://bit.ly/RVFaQd@nicolamorgan

5 Dialogue Basics: http://bit.ly/UeihE3 @marcykennedy

How To Enjoy Critical Reviews of Your Own Work: http://bit.ly/RVFi22@JustineLavaworm

How to Prepare For a Book Launch: http://bit.ly/UeiQgY@jodyhedlund

How do authors benefit from agents: http://bit.ly/UeiOWo@rachellegardner

5 Questions Indie Authors Should Always Ask An Agent: http://bit.ly/UeiW8A@ornaross

The 6 Magic Words That Always Get Clicks: http://bit.ly/Uel686@authormedia

Tips for 1st time ebook writers: http://bit.ly/RVKW4j@woodwardkaren

Author Solutions’ Misleading PR Strategies: http://bit.ly/UelaVo@victoriastrauss

Classic Female Fantasy Writers: http://bit.ly/RVL2c0@fantasyfaction

From last resort to new career–how 1 writer self-published: http://bit.ly/Uelpjp@dirtywhitecandy

What’s so funny? Humor in nonfiction writing: http://bit.ly/RVLmrk@ruthwcrocker

Writing Through a Rough Patch of Life: http://bit.ly/Uelsvk@THahnBurkett

The Myth of Giving Away 15% Ownership in Your Work: http://bit.ly/RVLsze@deanwesleysmith

The Publishing Process in GIF Form: http://bit.ly/OwuFN3@nathanbransford

Writing: Why Your Third Grade Teacher Was Wrong: http://bit.ly/S2WdOU@heidicohen

5 tips for creating self-pub success: http://bit.ly/S2Wmlx@booksparkspr

When Should You Write Full-Time? http://bit.ly/RZ0VZJ@duolit @highervis

How Clichés Can Help You Create Great Characters: http://bit.ly/S31tCe@fantasyfaction

How to build a readership for your blog and books: http://bit.ly/OwCWAB@jodyhedlund

Using Screenplay Techniques in Novel-Writing: http://bit.ly/S31FBq@sarahalderson

Writing secret: all you need is curiosity and surprise: http://bit.ly/OwDhU4@speechwriterguy

Lessons from a Copywriter for Better Fiction: http://bit.ly/S31R3z@emilywenstrom

How (Not) to Be a Brilliant Writer: http://bit.ly/S31VAA@ava_jae

The Tools Needed to Make a Living as a Writer: http://bit.ly/OwDDtQ@bubblecow

How to Edit Your Book in 4 Steps: http://bit.ly/S32cU2@writersdigest

Self-Publishing and The Midlist: http://bit.ly/S32hqW

Narcotics in Science Fiction & Fantasy: http://bit.ly/OwEdaN@tordotcom

Advice from Mark Twain on the Art and Craft of Writing: http://bit.ly/S32p9G@suzannewfisher

Use Character Quirks to Grab Readers’ Attention: http://bit.ly/OwEuuy@KMWeiland

How to Focus Your Blog or Blogged Book on a Topic: http://bit.ly/OwPzf5@ninaamir

How to avoid negativity online: http://bit.ly/S39h6Y@nicolamorgan

How To Work On More Than One Book At A Time: http://bit.ly/OwPTdI@thecreativepenn

Ideas to rethink during this digital revolution: http://bit.ly/S39ya8@rachellegardner

Getting lost in historical fiction: http://bit.ly/OwQxYD@history_girls

Where Genres Come From and How to Stitch Them Together: http://bit.ly/OwQR9V@KgElfland2ndCuz

Against Acknowledgments: http://nyr.kr/Po5n6u@pageturner

Maturity–The Difference Between the Amateur and the Professional: http://bit.ly/QlnpYW @kristenlambTX

Social Media Will Not Sell Your Book: http://bit.ly/Qlnvzv@hilarydavidson

The Last Word: 9 Famous Authors’ Epitaphs: http://bit.ly/Po5K0W@BookishWallace

Top 10 Reasons People Use To Justify Pirating Digital Content (And Why They’re Wrong): http://bit.ly/Po5Ntt @robwhart

The Square-One Story Killer: http://bit.ly/QlnDPG @storyfix

5 Lessons Learned From Writing 3 Novels: http://bit.ly/QlnJXr@ScottTBartlett

Tips for successful book marketing: http://bit.ly/Po6anU@writersdigest

Meet Mr Fifty Shades: EL James’s husband speaks out: http://bit.ly/Po7xTy@guardianbooks

How Affordable Color POD Could Change the Comics Industry: http://bit.ly/Po7Q0E

KDP freebies–a look at the numbers: http://bit.ly/T8cd57@Porter_Anderson @dvinjamuri

Indie Authors: Your Copyright Page Needs Work: http://bit.ly/Po8H1q@jimhbs

Why genre fiction is an e-reader’s best friend: http://bit.ly/Qlp9RY@annabaddeley

Charge Your Writing Batteries: http://bit.ly/Po98sA @noveleditor

Falling in love with fictional characters–a reader’s tribute to “Eloise”: http://bit.ly/Po9zDn @junglereds

25 Synonyms for “Delete”: http://bit.ly/QlptQr@writing_tips

Genre Blending: http://bit.ly/Po9Nu0 @fantasyfaction

Top 3 Reasons to Give Away Your Book: http://bit.ly/QlpwM4@tobywneal

Tips for creating complex villains: http://bit.ly/QmGWIl@ashkrafton

15 grammatical errors to avoid: http://bit.ly/S4UFzC@bubblecow

Outlining Backwards:http://bit.ly/QmGZ77

How to Slam Dunk Your 90-Second Pitch: http://bit.ly/S4UNPR@debraeve

How To Protect Your Writing Time: http://bit.ly/S4V9G7@KellyMcClymer

3 Writing Commandments: http://bit.ly/QmHjma@jhansenwrites

Tips for combatting paid reviews: http://bit.ly/S4VtVd@annerallen

Amazon in the UK: Worries About Waterstones: http://janefriedman.com/2012/09/20/writing-on-the-ether-56/#6@eoinpurcell @Porter_Anderson

7 tips for keeping your motivation as a writer: http://bit.ly/QmHqhB@dirtywhitecandy

3 ways to end your book…that you should reconsider: http://bit.ly/QmHxtG@JaelMcHenry

Writing the Perfect Pitch: http://bit.ly/S4W1KK

An apostrophe review: http://bit.ly/QmHGwY@livewritethrive

Ways to Become an Insecure Writer: http://bit.ly/QmHHkx@lyndaryoung

5 Smarter Habits of Great Writers: http://bit.ly/QmHHBi

Beat the Bestsellers–the Other Way to the Top: http://bit.ly/SELvdL@NickThacker

Writing in a second language: http://bit.ly/S4WaxX

Re-releasing print books as ebooks: http://bit.ly/S4Y1mr@nicolamorgan

An important quality of a charismatic male character: http://bit.ly/QmINgn@rebeccaberto

A review of commas, dashes, and colons: http://bit.ly/S4YwwI

99 Ways to Tell a Story: http://bit.ly/QmIT7F @sophie_novak

Agency Pricing in Europe? No. http://bit.ly/SEM0on@Porter_Anderson @PublishersLunch

Selling Literary Fiction: http://bit.ly/SEMn1Y@thecreativepenn @tglong

Making the Most of Writers’ Conferences: http://bit.ly/T8D0Oz@frugalbookpromo

The perils of paid-for reviews: http://bit.ly/T8D6WG@dearauthor

The elephant in the writing room: http://bit.ly/OL91uj@annerooney

Overcoming Writing Challenges: http://bit.ly/PTrnV7@lefrenchbook

Approaching Top Reviewers on Amazon: http://bit.ly/T8drNG@AlexisGrant @Porter_Anderson

Beat the Bestsellers – The Other Way to the Top—Guest Post by Nick Thacker

by Nick Thacker @NickThacker

nickthackerIf you’re like any other author (or person, for that matter), you probably hold a book with the words “New York Times Bestselling Author” on it in much higher esteem than others. Authors, for as long as “The Lists” have been out, have tried to find the “magic bullet” method of getting their book placed side-by-side with the likes of Dan Brown, J.K. Rowling, and Robert Ludlum. Their reasoning, while implausible, is sound: “if my book can get on that list, I’ll be set. I won’t have to work another day in my life!” clip_image001Ok, well maybe it’s not that extreme, but it’s not too far off. Heck, I tend to daydream about landing a huge publishing deal that’ll send me a half-million-dollar advance, and a spot beside the next in the Bourne saga. But truthfully, my expectations–and yours, if you’re a writer–should be a little lower.

It’s a well-known fact that the bestseller lists (NYT, Book Review; pick one) are just proprietary algorithms that would make Google proud, that select and churn out “bestsellers” left and right–sometimes before the book even hits the shelves.

It’s even been rumored that these lists are contrived forms of propaganda intended to keep the “establishment media” agencies ahead of the game.

Big-name authors like the aforementioned reap some of the benefits of being on these lists, no doubt (as do the publishing companies that push them!). But the bottom line for the rest of us new or even mid-list authors is that we don’t have the choice to get to The Lists. We can try–by writing more and better and for longer periods of time–but there’s never a guarantee. Success at that level is at best as elusive as it is esteemed.

No, we humble wordsmiths are resigned to the closets of our one-bedroom apartments in the suburbs, wrenching and prying out words that might never be read by anyone other than our devoted spouses and fan (yes, that’s singular…). It’s easier to complain, blaming the system and politicians and publishing companies and agents and…

There is another way.

Yes, that’s right. There’s another way to “the top.” While it isn’t via “traditional” channels like landing on a well-respected list or having a daytime spot on Oprah, but it’s a just as–or perhaps more–satisfying way to achieve success in the scary world of books: making a ton of money and attracting a bunch of new readers without the strings, constraints, and conditions of big publishing.

“Self-publishing” may still have a bit of a stigma, but it seems as though more and more, authors are expected to market themselves; either putting up the money for an advertising firm, or by going it alone. There’s simply not as much money in the industry as there used to be (or, at least, it’s not allocated the same way…).

Sure enough, authors–published or not–are finding new and untested ways to market, promote, and sell their books. Mailing lists, social networking, and special Kindle shenanigans come to mind, and all of these are great ways to market your stuff after it’s written.

And that’s just it — the “new” method for long-term success in this world has little to do with “after the fact” marketing.

It’s about writing more books.

Specifically, it’s about publishing (however you want to define the word) more books.

The proof is in the pudding, as they say, and I can vouch for it. Over the past few months, I’ve studied just about every marketing tactic, promotional strategy, and book-selling trick known to the self-publishing world. Some worked, some didn’t, but I discovered a truth that authors like J.A. Konrath and others have been preaching for awhile:

The more books you have available to be purchased, the more you will sell.

The problem facing any author is the delicate balance between “finishing” a book so that it’s polished, edited, and basically perfect (which is probably impossible anyway), and just getting it out to market, flaws and all.

Since no one wants to embarrass themselves with a shoddy product, authors tend to lean toward the “waiting” side of things. But there really is another way:

I’m a big proponent of the “lean startup” method of launching a product, app, or business, and I’ve applied the approach to my books. Here is my process that’s worked to provide me with a modest yet growing monthly income stream:

1. Write a lot of stuff.

I say “stuff” here because you don’t have to publish super-long books on Amazon — I have a line of “Dead-Simple Guides” that I market as “articles,” even though they’re on the longer side of that definition (around 10,000-20,000 words). I also have a manifesto, a couple full-length nonfiction books, and some guides.

The whole point is that I am constantly writing — and publishing. It’s building a backlist, sure, but it’s also building a craft around what I like to write. However, none of this would be possible without the next steps…

2. Have a “pre-reading” plan in place.

I’ve started blogging and building a mailing list of possible readers that I “tap” whenever I’m about to release something — I can send them a free copy of the book if they’re willing to read through it and let me know what they think. This saves me from hiring a professional editor for everything I write (I still go with an editor for the longer stuff).

These beta readers vet out the typos, continuity errors, and generally anything they don’t like — allowing me to rewrite knowing that it’ll be much better afterwards.

3. Shoot for digital first.

Digital is fast, immediately trackable, and adaptable. I don’t want to wait around for an editor to find every single thing that’s wrong with the book — I can instead let the beta readers tear it up, rewrite it a few times, publish it, and make more minute changes as we go forward. If a particular book does really well one month, I might think about offering a special print version or something, but not usually from the very beginning.

This process is different, and it’s not what a “major” house would probably recommend. But by doing it this way, I’m working to be a bestseller in a handful of sub-sub-sub-sub-categories, not the overall Nonfiction or Fiction categories. I don’t expect to sell 10,000 copies of anything in the first week of a launch, and that’s not the goal. The goal is to completely own a few of these smaller niche categories over time.

The process works because it’s so much faster the “old” way.

Yes, you have to type fast and think fast and publish fast, but it’s really not that bad. In fact, I can’t imagine waiting a year or more to go from finished manuscript to print — I usually go from concept to storefront in a little over a month — and I’m working on numerous projects at once.

You can “beat” the bestsellers by doing it this way, but you have to make the commitment to building trust with some readers over time, and consistently provide them with something to read. I believe most people would prefer to read a full-length novel and a few shorts from a favorite author, putting up with the minor typo or error every now and then (that will eventually get fixed anyway), than wait for a typo-less, full-length novel only every year.

Get it? The point isn’t to ignore mistakes and publish for the sake of making money — it’s to publish enough stuff that you’re staying in front of people so they can’t forget you, offering better and better stuff as the relationship grows.

As small business owners, our benefit is speed. Use it to your advantage, and you’ll “win” this publishing game.

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Overcoming Writing Challenges: Guest post by Anne Trager

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Guest post by Anne Trager, @lefrenchbook, the founder of Le French Book and translator of The Paris Lawyer by Sylvie Granotier

I recently founded Le French Book, an independent publisher dedicated to bringing readers around the English-speaking world, “French books you’ll love in English.” My husband found that tagline. I found our motto: “If we love it, we’ll translate it.”Because I’m the one doing some of the translation. I have many years of translating behind me, but when I took on our first crime fiction novel, The Paris Lawyer by Sylvie Granotier, I encountered some unique challenges that required some creative thinking, a lot of research, and then, well, some real questioning about what we were trying to do. That is where I found the answer.

The Paris Lawyer is a legal procedural set in France. The heroine is a rookie lawyer who takes on a big felony case, pro bono, to boost her career and ends up having to confront her own past. It’s a great book. It’s well written. I love it. So what was the problem?

Well, France and the United States have very different court systems. Lawyers do not do the same thing. Court procedure is different. The very purpose of a trial diverges. Oh dear, oh dear.

My worries began when I was walking around the outside of the Palais de Justice in Paris, getting a feel for the place, since the main character is a lawyer and some scenes take place there. It occurred to me as I did so that there is no way you can translate “Palais de Justice” by “courthouse,” which is not nearly grand enough for this edifice. Justice has been dispensed in this building since medieval times. It still holds the Sainte Chapelle, the chapel of the royal palace that once stood here, not to mention the Conciergerie, the former prison where Marie-Antoinette was held before losing her head (literally). OK, OK, none of these details actually impact the story. I ended up making the decision that the story is more important. I called it the courthouse. That’s what it was for the main character.

But then how would I deal with the defendant standing at a bar in front of three judges, not one, who are the ones firing out questions, while the lawyer stands on the side? That is court procedure in France, so there was no question of changing it. I had to make sure that the differences came across smoothly, without them keeping the reader from enjoying the story. I had to find ways to make sure the characters or context explained things, explained that in France, the court appearance is more a ritual confrontation with the law than it is for presenting evidence and facts. This is because there is a prior inquiry during which several judges have actually made a decision. I had to work with the French author to make sure that these adaptations did not denature the story.

Long-time translator David Bellos, in his book, Is That a Fish in Your Ear? Translation and the Meaning of Everything, writes that translators are matchmakers, because ultimately, they “find matches, not equivalences…in the hope and expectation that their sum will produce a new work that can serve as an overall substitute for the source.” Ultimately this means recreating a reading experience, so it brought me back to the very important question, “What are we trying to do here?” Our goal with Le French Book is to publish entertaining books, my goal as a translator is to make sure the read in English gives the same shivers of expectation, longing to read more and pangs of emotions. I had to make sure nothing took the reader out of the story or undermined suspension of disbelief. Imagine my satisfaction when Edgar Award-winning author Thomas H. Cook read the translation and said it was“beautifully written” and that “it captures the reader from the first page and never lets go.”

Le French Book is so excited about The Paris Lawyer that they are giving away a trip to France and lots of free books, surprises and gifts just to celebrate. This party starts on September 18. Go see for yourself: Great promotion from Le French Book (http://www.theparislawyer.com)

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Trager_headshotAbout Anne Trager: Anne Trager has lived in France for over 26 years, working in translation, publishing and communications. In 2011, she woke up one morning and said, “I just can’t stand it anymore. There are way too many good books being written in France not reaching a broader audience.” That’s when she founded Le French Book to translate some of those books into English. The company’s motto is “If we love it, we translate it,” and Anne loves crime fiction.

SYLVIE~1About Sylvie Granotier:  Author, screenwriter and actress Sylvie Granotier loves to weave plots that send shivers up your spine. She was born in Algeria and grew up in Paris and Morocco. She studied literature and theater in Paris, then set off traveling—the United States, Brazil, Afghanistan, and elsewhere, ending with a tour of Europe. She wound up in Paris again, an actress, with a job and some recognition. But she is a writer at heart, and started her publishing career translating Grace Paley’s short story collection Enormous Changes at the Last Minute into French. Fourteen novels and many short stories later, Sylvie Granotier is a major crime fiction author in France. Sylvie splits her time between Paris and the Creuse.

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