From First Sentence To Book Deal

Vivian Conroy is the author of the Lady Alkmene Mysteries

by Vivian Conroy, @VivWrites

When the editor called me to offer me a 3-book deal for my Lady Alkmene Callender 1920s’ mysteries, she told me that after reading a sentence or two she already knew this book was something she’d want to buy. Of course my book had to deliver as a whole (appealing characters, a solid plot) but her remark made me realize something extremely important for writers:  whether you are submitting to a contest, including pages with a query to an agent, or sending in requested work after a conference pitch, your first sentence or first paragraph has to hook the reader right away.

The first sentence has to do many things at once: set the tone of the story, show that something is about to happen that the reader wants to be a part of. When I typed the first sentence of my manuscript, I saw a very clear picture in my mind that I wanted to convey: an unconventional aristocratic woman at a party, reaching for a lighter to relight her cigarette and overhearing a few whispered words that pique her interest and involve her in what is to become her very first murder investigation. Continue reading

What’s Scary–For Writers

What's scary for writers is a blog post by Elizabeth Spann Craig

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

It’s Halloween, the perfect time to mull over fear.

I read a lot of really scary stuff online.  None of it has to do with monsters, either.  There is a lot of both advice and just negative blanket statements out there for writers to deal with–most of it well-intended, but some of it ultimately unhealthy for writers.

Here are a few examples of the scary statements and advice that writers hear:

Reading is losing to the competition, especially to social media and gaming.

True.  But, if you think about it, people are actually reading more, I think, than they used to.  When I was growing up, everyone was watching TV and on the landline phone.  Now they’re reading–it just happens to be micropublishing.  They’re reading Facebook posts, blog posts, Twitter posts, text messages. But everyone is reading–and writing–more.  Instead, consider experimenting with online writing platforms like Wattpad.

There is a ‘wall of content’ for writers to compete with.

Yes.  But what’s our ultimate goal? If it’s writing for a large audience, we may have to make shrewd sacrifices to make our stories stand out. Possible solution:  make sure our book stands out with an excellent cover and editing. If commercial success is important, write more in line with the market.

Write first thing in the morning before checking email, social media, or doing anything else.

I personally ascribe to this one.  But I live with people who are not morning people.  This method would not work for them or for many people.  Instead, write whenever you hit your creative peak each day.

Outlining is the best method for professional writers.  If you’re not an outliner, you may feel that you’re not working as productively as other writers.   But whatever works for you is the best method for you.  Only re-evaluate if your writing isn’t going as well as you’d like.

Adverbs are to be avoided at all costs.  They have their uses. Maybe you just need to evaluate if you’re leaning too heavily on them in your project.

Traditionally published writers get marketing help and support. Unless you’ve written a blockbuster, the marketing most writers receive is simply bookstore placement and a mention in the publisher’s catalog.

Show don’t tell.  This advice works well sometimes and not so well at others.   If you’re wanting to increase pace and develop tension quickly (an action scene, for example), then you’ll want to tell instead of show.  More on this from editor Linda S. Clare.

An interest in making money means you’re not a serious artist.  As far as I’m aware, even artists have to eat sometime. I think it’s valuable creating books that encourage people to read (and to pay for the entertainment).

Traditionally published writers make more money than self-published writers.  Some of them may. My own experience didn’t corroborate this statement.

Writers need long periods of time to focus on their writing.  For some writers, there’s never a perfect time to write; there’s never a time when they couldn’t be doing something else important.  Sometimes writing in short segments of time, finding 10 or 15 minutes at a time, is the best way to accomplish a writing goal.

Writers write when they hear the Muse speaking to them.   Many writers never feel particularly inspired to write but sit down and make the inspiration happen as they go.

Do you hear any advice or blanket statements on the market that make you feel uncomfortable?  Which ones did I miss?

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Twitterific Writing Links

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

A weekly roundup of the best writing links from around the web.

Twitterific writing links are fed into the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine (developed by writer and software engineer Mike Fleming) which has over 35,000 free articles on writing related topics. It’s the search engine for writers.

4 Ways to Pre-plan Your #NaNoWriMo Story: http://ow.ly/lcb7305klvu @WordDreams

How to Outline Your #NaNoWriMo Novel:  http://ow.ly/Sq7S305klok @NatePhilbrick

On #NaNoWriMo and Finding Time:  http://ow.ly/x7gO305kkXF @Ava_Jae

5 Things You Need To Do Before #NaNoWriMo:  http://ow.ly/Szvu305klMS @KMHodgeAuthor  @WomenWriters               Continue reading

Parenting and Writing

Parenting and Writing is a blog post from author Elizabeth Spann Craig

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Parenting and writing.  It can be a challenging combination … or can it?  A lot depends on the child/teen in question, the parent’s schedule and non-child stressors, and the writing we’re trying to accomplish.

I read a lot of blog posts and the majority of what I read about writing mothers (in particular…writing fathers tend to have a different mindset, which I’ll get to in a moment) makes me sad.  They seem conflicted and guilty, torn between writing and wanting to do a good job as a mother.

A beautifully well-written piece from  writer Sarah Curtis Graziano in Brevity:Continue reading

Considering Our International Audience

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Are your books available to an international audience?  I’ve found that my international sales have picked up after I implemented a few tweaks.

First off, do you have an Amazon Author Central profile on the international sites that support them?  Be aware that, depending on the site, you may need to create a new login (instead of using your usual Amazon login), and that some sites don’t have all the features that others do.  You can use Google Translate to help you with a bio, etc. (my recommendation would be to go very basic with it) or you could pay a translator at a site like Fiverr to have your bio inexpensively translated.

USA
UK
Germany
France
Japan

Amazon India also has an Author Central, but our profile populates automatically there.

Here is the list of international Amazon sites (not all of them offer Author Central):

Visiting the sites can be very helpful, in terms of figuring out our international pricing.  Let’s take Mexico as an example.  I visited the Amazon Mexico site (translating the page to English with a click of my mouse), and searched for my genre, cozy mystery, in the Kindle store.  I sorted the results by popularity and could see that the most popular in that category were priced between 114–$123 peso.  According to Google’s currency calculator, that’s between $6.04 and $6.51 US dollars.  For me, that’s a bit high.  I also saw on that page books as low as 0.00 and 38.41 peso, which is  $2.03.  Better.

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So, instead of just basing the international prices on our US prices, we can look on the sites, see which books are selling well, and price accordingly (or at least use it as a guide).

Another thing to consider is our international print distribution. Although Amazon does a great job distributing ebooks to foreign markets, it’s good to evaluate our approach for print distribution.  Printed books are expensive overseas because the shipping costs are exorbitant.

One alternative is to use IngramSpark to fulfill international print orders. They have printers all over the world and distributing print on demand from these printers helps to defray the readers’ shipping  costs. As David Penny wrote in his article for the Alliance of Independent Authors a year ago:

Ingram has facilities in the US, UK, France and Australia, and services other territories through partner arrangements. As of 2015 there are partners in Germany, Russia, Poland, Brazil and South Korea. By the end of 2016 they will be putting in place partner arrangements in South America, South Africa, China and India.

You can use the same interior and cover PDFs you uploaded to CreateSpace to upload to IngramSpark, but because there are some differences between the two businesses, you may need to get your spine tweaked (I believe there is a difference in page thickness).  If you go this route, you’ll want to opt out of expanded distribution at CreateSpace.  Additionally, you’ll need an ISBN for your book to be published by Ingram (not the free one that you may get from CreateSpace).  There is, as well, a set-up fee for IngramSpark of $49 a book, although there are frequently coupons to reduce or waive that cost.

Personally, I’ve found going on IngramSpark worth it.  Last month I netted twice as much from them as from CreateSpace.

Additional reading and resources: 

A Facebook group called The International Indie Author, headed by writer Mark Williams.  You will need to ask permission to join.

I’ve referred to this article by Giacomo Giammetteo before, but it’s such an excellent overview of CreateSpace vs. IngramSpark that I’ll list it again: Watchdog: Ingram Spark vs CreateSpace for Self-publishing Print Books .

Have you got Author Central profiles for the different international Amazon sites?  How do your international print sales look?  Any tips that I’m missing?

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