Author: Elizabeth Spann Craig

Some writers I know bask in the writing process, savoring the time spent crafting a novel as the seconds turn into minutes turn into weeks (and months…and years). For them, writing is a drawn-out love affair.

I’m not one of those people. When I have an idea, I want to get it written as quickly as possible. Why? Because I’ve got a ton of other ideas, lining up on my brain’s tarmac waiting to take flight.

Here are some tips for writing your first drafts (note: first drafts) as quickly as possible.

Give yourself permission to stink. (Put your head out the window and take a deep breath. That odor you smell? I just started a new project.) Don’t worry so much about your grammar and sentence construction. Don’t try to describe your setting to the finest detail. Dialogue a bit wooden? Don’t fret about it now. All these boo-boos can be fixed during the revision process. Why waste time perfecting a certain passage when it might end up on the discard heap?

Don’t revise as you go along. Start writing and don’t look back. Plow ahead. Odds are, when you finish your draft, there will be tons of stuff (tons!) you’ll have to change anyway. Decide to change a character’s name? Fine. Highlight the new name and keep on trucking. You can go back and clean things up when you’re finished with the draft. Why waste time and effort?

Set a quota and stick to it. Use either the “words-per-day” method or set aside a certain amount of time every day to write. Don’t get up from your desk (or bench or bed or hammock or wherever you write) until you’ve satisfied your quota. It’s that easy (insert diabolical laugh here). To get even more done, “fiddle” with your quotas. For instance, you could start out the week with a thousand word daily quota, then increase it by 200 words per day throughout the week. Or you could pick one day a week to “double-dip,” where you write twice your daily quota.

Research? You don’t need so much stinkin’ research! Do only the barest of bare minimums of research. Some writers I know use “doing research” as a procrastination device (I know, can you believe it?). If you come upon something you don’t know—a fact, a name, the capital of Justrevoltedstan—just type XXX and keep on writing. You can go back and fill it in during the revision stage. Again, why waste time researching something that might not even make it into the final draft?

Stay away from that durn Internet and other shiny, distracting things. As my blog host Elizabeth recommends, set a timer for checking email and blogs and Facebook and Twitter. Then, when it goes off, your break is over and it’s time to get back to…ding!

Hey, gotta run!

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The first book in Alan Orloff’s Last Laff Mystery series, KILLER ROUTINE, is now available, at your favorite booksellers and on-line. His debut mystery, DIAMONDS FOR THE DEAD, came out last April and was nominated for the Best First Novel Agatha Award. For more information about Alan and his books, please visit www.alanorloff.com

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Thanks for inviting me to your blog today, Elizabeth! I always enjoy my visits here (You have such nice blog readers!)

Thanks for coming by, Alan! Congratulations on your Agatha nomination and your new release!

Now that I’ve brought up a drawback to the Kindle (which I believe will be quickly ironed out in future generations of the product), I thought I’d write a little on one unexpected benefit I’ve enjoyed with the Kindle…squeezing in extra revision time.

In the past, my revisions have mostly been done at a planned time and place—not spontaneously at all. I write on the go in little unexpected pockets of extra time, but haven’t really been able to edit that way.

Instead, I’ve just taken my laptop and headed off to the library or coffee shop. There are definite drawbacks to revising on paper—one is the transcription process from paper to computer if I get too far ahead. Besides, it’s a pain lugging around a 2-inch pile of paper in the off-chance that I can catch a few minutes to edit or revise.

The Kindle does make it easier to edit on the go.

I’ve just saved my Word docs as text files (.txt) to make things easier. (You can do that when you click ‘save as’ when you save a file, or you can just copy/paste the document onto NotePad.) You could also save them as PDFs, but the PDFs are like photos on the Kindle—and you can’t make the font any bigger (and small type is starting to be a problem for me.)

There are a couple of ways to upload a file to your Kindle (my directions will be for PCs). The free way is to connect your Kindle to your computer using the charger you got with your device (the plug part of the cord comes off and you’ll have a USB connection underneath.) Plug one end of the cord into your Kindle, the other into your computer USB port.

When your computer recognizes your Kindle, go to Start/Computer. You’ll see “Devices with removable storage.” And your Kindle will be there. Click on the Kindle icon and open the documents folder. This is the destination for your manuscript file.

Go to your Documents library and select the file you want. Drag the file to the Kindle (on my computer, I can see the Kindle listed in a column to the left of the Documents library.) Drop it in the Documents folder for the Kindle. Disconnect your Kindle from your PC, hit home on your Kindle device, and you’ll see your file.

Or…you could email it to your Kindle. The cost, I believe, is now 15 or 25 cents to do so. Your Kindle has an email address—you can find it on the Manage Your Kindle page when you pull up your Amazon account on your computer. It’s a @kindle.com address.

Editing on the Kindle is best for a global read of your manuscript for content problems and less for doing line editing. You can make notes on your Kindle for changes you’d like to make to the document. All the notes that you make on your manuscript can be transferred to your computer. You’ll just attach your USB cable again, go to My Computer, find your Kindle device, look in the documents folder, and you’ll see a My Clippings folder. Your notes will be in there and you can just copy the file to your computer.

Does it sound complicated? It’s actually more intuitive than I’ve made it sound. It certainly does beat lugging around a huge manuscript with me everywhere. :)

How do you like to do edits and revisions on your manuscript? Do you print them out, do them all on computer, or have you tried using the Kindle?

I had coffee with a friend of mine last week. She’s also a big reader—now almost exclusively on the Kindle.

She’s currently reading a novel for our book club. “Let me tell you,” she said with a frown, “I’m having a real problem with this book.”

I perked up. This is a friend that doesn’t even have a problem with obscure Russian literature…so if commercial fiction was stumping her, I was all ears.

“This writer has 7 or 8 different names that start with the letter m. And there are absolutely no textual reminders of the characters’ identities. I can’t tell who the heck they are or how they relate to each other. And some of the characters have real names and nicknames.”

She was pretty agitated about it by now and was waving her arms around and sloshing her coffee.

“And on top of it all, I can’t just flip back and figure out who these people are! With a paperback, I’d spend half a minute just flipping back until I got a clue who the character is. With a Kindle, it’s just not that easy. I’m getting ready to give up on this book.”

What the author was doing wasn’t good for any book, of course. Having characters with names that start with the same letter can get confusing…especially that many names. And this was an author published with a major house.

The trouble was compounded by the fact that the writer hadn’t put in any of those little tagging reminders of who the character is (especially when they’ve been offstage for a while.) It’s helpful to have a ‘Jenny hopped in the car, still wearing her scrubs from work.’ Really, you don’t even have to be that vague with the reminders: sometimes a ‘Jenny, Cameron’s sister, got in the car’ is fine to slip in.

To make matters worse, there were nicknames for more than one character. And these nicknames weren’t like ‘sweetie.’ No, these were actual names. And the nicknames weren’t just truncated parts of the character name (Mike for Michael.) They were totally different.

My friend mulled aloud a few minutes about whether the book would have been salvageable if the story hadn’t been on the Kindle. She said that she loved her Kindle, but still missed being able to quickly flip through a book instead of using a “go to” function.

I’m sure that future roll-outs of the Kindle will probably fix this issue—maybe they’ll have touch screens or a quick scrolling option.

But in the meantime, it offered another reason to double-check my manuscripts for name problems. Is there anything confusing in there? Would a reader need to flip around in my book to try and figure out who the character is? If so, they’re working too hard. This is supposed to be entertainment…better to just fix it.

Especially since flipping pages isn’t exactly easy with Kindles.

Are there character naming problems that you run into as a reader or writer? If you have a Kindle, do you miss page flipping?

Here are writing links that I’ve posted to Twitter in the last week.

I’m delighted that now we have an efficient method of locating resources on writing topics when you need them—via the Writer’s Knowledge Base search engine and software engineer and writer Mike Fleming’s ingenuity. The links I tweet (which are writers’ blogs, agents’ and editors’ blogs) all are added to the engine to make it easier for you to access the information you’re looking for.

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Reading your novel backwards: http://bit.ly/fVFV7V

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My son is interested in guitar lessons so I called up a teacher that our friends were using for their son’s lessons.

The guitarist and I talked for a little while about scheduling the classes. “Actually,” he said, “I’m at the point where gas prices are so high that I am thinking about not driving around to students’ houses, but have them to come to mine.”

Still trying to work these lessons into our weekly craziness, I asked him where he lived. He hesitated, then mentioned a neighborhood that admittedly doesn’t have the best reputation and was a good 30 minute drive from here.

“It’s not as bad a place as you think,” he said quickly. “The neighborhood is pretty safe. You really wouldn’t have to worry about your son here. My wife and I are both artists, so we’re just living where we can afford. And I’m holding down three jobs right now and still can’t make ends meet.”

“Oh, I totally understand,” I said. “I’m a writer.”

He laughed. “So you’re scraping by, too.”

“Not even! But I’m luckily married to someone who isn’t an artist, so I’ve got a personal patron of the arts.”

It’s a sad fact that most writers, artists, and musicians don’t make enough to live on. I get asked a couple of times a month if it’s possible to make a living writing books. It isn’t for me. But maybe if you’re writing a blockbuster book or if you end up with a TV or book deal, or if you write a lot of midlist books in a year (and are getting royalties on your backlist)…yeah, you could do it. But I still don’t think it’s a great living. It makes for nice additional income. Do you have children? Need health insurance? You probably shouldn’t even consider leaving your day job.

To get a hint at what most YA, romance (and, I’ll add—mystery) writers are making for books, here is Brenda Hiatt’s famous “Show Me the Money” post where authors have anonymously written in to tell their advances, etc.

How do most artists get by? If they’re not married to someone who can support them, they have a day job.

You could even find a writing-related day job. I’ve had those in the past. I’ll still occasionally submit articles to one of those weekly or monthly free local periodicals that you’ll see in restaurants and coffee shops, just to keep my hand in it. But I’ve worked for them full-time before, too—you can write articles, sell ads, etc.

There are a lot of writers I know who teach—either part time or full-time.

I know quite a few writers who also freelance. I know a couple of journalists, too.

It’s probably more fun for a writer to find a writing-related day job, but it doesn’t have to be that way, either. And one writer believes that you shouldn’t feel pressured to find a high-paying, prestigious day job, either. I read an interesting post a week or so ago: In Praise of Crummy Day Jobs, on the Genreality blog.

In the post, author Carrie Vaughn mentions that many writers overlook the fact that they don’t have to find and hold down a career-track kind of job…they can find an hourly-pay gig and then come home and write. She wrote:

The thing about all these jobs: I rarely had to work overtime. They weren’t difficult. I usually came home ready to write. In fact, especially at the book store, I’d jot down notes about the current work in progress throughout the day, shove them in my pocket, and in the evening come home, pull out all the notes, and write.

There’s a lot of truth to hackneyed sayings…and ‘starving artist’ definitely isn’t too far off the mark.

Although making time to write involves sacrifice, the nice thing about writing as compared with some of the other arts, is that we can easily slip a notebook into a laptop bag or a purse. We can write a couple of sentences here and there. Harder to do that when you’re lugging around a harp or a baritone or a canvas.

How do you work writing into your life?